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Jack's Birthday Suit

There's a mighty dear fellow named Jack wore no shirt to show off his six pack on top girls would pile they dug his smooth style til this mortal threw out his old back

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 8/16/2015 6:07:00 PM
Love it, Tim!!! Sounds like he got a kick out of it!! Limericks are always fun to read. : ) Always, Laura
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Date: 8/12/2015 3:57:00 PM
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Date: 8/12/2015 10:26:00 AM
Very funny, Tim! Jack will get a kick out of it!
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Date: 8/12/2015 8:16:00 AM
Ha ha, this is funny! I see jack appreciated it as well.
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/12/2015 8:59:00 AM
Yes it was part of our lovefest for Jack's birthday
Date: 8/11/2015 1:27:00 PM
Ha! Ha! Well done, Tim! Love, Kim
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Date: 8/11/2015 12:44:00 PM
Sorry Mr. Tim... almost missed this one! So many good wishes... I am truly overwhelmed, my good buddy! Thank you kindly for this... my back is fine though! YEEHAW can still bring it... NOT! LOL
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Date: 8/11/2015 11:59:00 AM
Tremendous write... Had to come over to read it... LOL...
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Date: 8/11/2015 11:46:00 AM
ha ha ha love it Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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