Jack's Birthday Suit

There's a mighty dear fellow named Jack wore no shirt to show off his six pack on top girls would pile they dug his smooth style til this mortal threw out his old back
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Breidenthal Avatar
August 16, 2015 at 6:07 PM
Love it, Tim!!! Sounds like he got a kick out of it!! Limericks are always fun to read. : ) Always, Laura
Chircop Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 3:57 PM
lol..haha
Trifiatis Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 10:26 AM
Very funny, Tim! Jack will get a kick out of it!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 8:16 AM
Ha ha, this is funny! I see jack appreciated it as well.
Smith Avatar
August 12, 2015 at 8:59 AM
Yes it was part of our lovefest for Jack's birthday
Merryman Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 1:27 PM
Ha! Ha! Well done, Tim! Love, Kim
Ellison Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 12:44 PM
Sorry Mr. Tim... almost missed this one! So many good wishes... I am truly overwhelmed, my good buddy! Thank you kindly for this... my back is fine though! YEEHAW can still bring it... NOT! LOL
Eastman Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 11:59 AM
Tremendous write... Had to come over to read it... LOL...
Allison Avatar
August 11, 2015 at 11:46 AM
ha ha ha love it Tim:-) hugs Jan xx
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