Jack-O-Lantern - Fulton

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Gass Avatar
March 29, 2009 at 8:29 PM
Beautiful, Trudy! The imagery in this is perfect. I lve Halloween and all the fun decorations, especially the Jack-o-lanterns! Thank you for your kind words. Even though I get depressed I have too much faith and fight to give up. :) Love, Robin
Burton Avatar
January 11, 2009 at 10:58 AM
Like this style and really seems easy but it really takes alot of energy to do this. enjoyed reading it have a great day.
Fawcett Avatar
November 25, 2008 at 2:31 PM
Great Fulton, Trudy, and with a perfect title that adds to the overall effect and imagery. Nice work! Love, Nigel
Meyer Avatar
November 25, 2008 at 10:35 AM
Enjoyed this ... striking out in different directions I see. Good for you! And, while I'm here, thank you for your comment on my featured poem, and the same back at you! ~Mom
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November 20, 2008 at 12:06 PM
What an uplifting use of the concise form. Made me smile. Nice job! I enjoyed it. Karen
Austin Avatar
October 17, 2008 at 4:26 AM
Welcome to premium, Trudy. Enjoyed this little seasonal jewel. Love, daver
Anos Avatar
October 15, 2008 at 9:39 PM
hahaha! A worthy piece for Jack! I wonder how you'll do this to another Jack (Frost)... Just guessin out loud dear hehe! Brgds. The Olongapoet
Spence Sr Avatar
October 15, 2008 at 8:43 PM
Certainly the imagery jumps right out in from of the readers face. This is very vivid and the words flow very well. I like the topography of the piece and its impact. Great job! ~Joseph
Degenhardt Avatar
October 14, 2008 at 5:31 AM
I'm not familiar with the form, but the read is great as it flows and is clear and the form seems to be ascetically pleasing. Michael
Torres Avatar
October 13, 2008 at 3:52 PM
Trudy very nice write. God bless Michael
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
October 13, 2008 at 1:07 PM
I've never tried this. Sounds like fun. Good luck. Vince
Winter Avatar
October 13, 2008 at 6:24 AM
Awesome girlfriend! This is so clever and reads like a winner to me! Good luck! Love, Shar
Ahmad Avatar
October 13, 2008 at 3:09 AM
yo trudy dude, cool write dude! Rock on man ;)
Strand Avatar
October 13, 2008 at 12:10 AM
Thank you for your kind comments Trudy and for the honour bestowed that you entered my latest contest.Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
October 12, 2008 at 6:49 PM
Great job on this fulton, Trudy!! I can see this guy sitting out on my porch all lit up!! ~ Carrie
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