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Jungle's deadly wolf roams, Jaws tightening as limbs Jut out from black of night; Jeering its prey for one Joust between man and beast: Jingling its canine paws, Jolts rip a hunter's flesh! Pleiades-J Contest of Kim Merryman 3/5/2017 Checked with www.howmanysyllable.com

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Date: 3/8/2017 2:24:00 PM
Coming back with congrats!
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Date: 3/8/2017 6:28:00 AM
Yet another masterpiece from a role model. This is just awwwwwwww... What a beautiful share...
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Date: 3/8/2017 2:19:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:43:00 PM
Congrats on your win Nette
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:35:00 PM
Congrats! Awesome!
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:31:00 PM
Congratulations nette!! :) big hugs and love. deb
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Date: 3/7/2017 7:51:00 PM
Very nice, Better, congratulations on your win hugs Eve
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Date: 3/7/2017 6:00:00 PM
Perfect descriptions for a jackal, Nette! Your mastery of words is truly awe inspiring! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 5:13:00 PM
Fantastic imagery, Nette! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 3/5/2017 4:37:00 PM
Excellently rendered, Nette! You tackled both the form and theme with ease and smoothness of expression. Hugs // paul
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Date: 3/5/2017 3:58:00 PM
An animal with a hunger that never ends..good luck
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Date: 3/5/2017 3:51:00 PM
I think these and coyotes look so much like dogs...feral though;) Well done nette!! Best wishes hun!! Big Hugggs deb
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Date: 3/5/2017 2:29:00 PM
Love your theme and your poem! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/5/2017 12:26:00 PM
An exciting jungle adventure in 7 lines! I'm happy the jackal taught the hunter a lesson...:) Lots of luck in the contest, Nette. Have a blessed Sunday...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/5/2017 12:06:00 PM
The way you describe him I don't want to meet him. Vivid. GL in the contest.
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Date: 3/5/2017 11:40:00 AM
I wouldn't want to be face to face with that creature.
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Date: 3/5/2017 11:01:00 AM
Nice Pleiades, nice to see the hunter doesn't always win!
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Date: 3/5/2017 10:04:00 AM
Very well done for the contest Nette! Good luck. It should do well :)
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Date: 3/5/2017 9:57:00 AM
Dear Nette WOW! Poetry in 3D! I almost became a victim! Stunning art! 7 My best, chuck
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Date: 3/5/2017 9:48:00 AM
- Excellent pleiades, Nette - Good luck in the contest - Sunday hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/5/2017 9:29:00 AM
Vivid descriptive write Nette I see Jackals and jaguars have been a popular theme:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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