Nette Onclaud Poet Pleiades

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Jackal

Jungle's deadly wolf roams,
Jaws tightening its limbs
Jutting out from ashed night;
Jeers growl for a prey's blood.
Jingling its canine paws,
Jolts ripping hunter's flesh
Joust against man...beast wins !




Pleiades-J Contest 
3/5/2017
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Agnes Krampe March 8, 2017 at 2:24 PM Coming back with congrats!

Funom Makama March 8, 2017 at 6:28 AM Yet another masterpiece from a role model. This is just awwwwwwww... What a beautiful share...

Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2017 at 2:19 AM - Congratulations on your win, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May March 7, 2017 at 8:43 PM Congrats on your win Nette

Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2017 at 8:35 PM Congrats! Awesome!

Deborah Burch March 7, 2017 at 8:31 PM Congratulations nette!! :) big hugs and love. deb

Eve Roper March 7, 2017 at 7:51 PM Very nice, Better, congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Laura Leiser March 7, 2017 at 6:00 PM Perfect descriptions for a jackal, Nette! Your mastery of words is truly awe inspiring! Congrats on your win :)

Kim Merryman March 7, 2017 at 5:13 PM Fantastic imagery, Nette! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings, Kim

Paul Callus March 5, 2017 at 4:37 PM Excellently rendered, Nette! You tackled both the form and theme with ease and smoothness of expression. Hugs // paul

Frederic Parker March 5, 2017 at 3:58 PM An animal with a hunger that never ends..good luck

Deborah Burch March 5, 2017 at 3:51 PM I think these and coyotes look so much like dogs...feral though;) Well done nette!! Best wishes hun!! Big Hugggs deb

Agnes Krampe March 5, 2017 at 2:29 PM Love your theme and your poem! Good luck in the contest.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 5, 2017 at 12:26 PM An exciting jungle adventure in 7 lines! I'm happy the jackal taught the hunter a lesson...:) Lots of luck in the contest, Nette. Have a blessed Sunday...hugs, Rhonda

Janis Medders Tobechi March 5, 2017 at 12:06 PM The way you describe him I don't want to meet him. Vivid. GL in the contest.

Tim Smith March 5, 2017 at 11:40 AM I wouldn't want to be face to face with that creature.

Arthur Vaso March 5, 2017 at 11:01 AM Nice Pleiades, nice to see the hunter doesn't always win!

Heidi Sands March 5, 2017 at 10:04 AM Very well done for the contest Nette! Good luck. It should do well :)

Chuck Melugin March 5, 2017 at 9:57 AM Dear Nette WOW! Poetry in 3D! I almost became a victim! Stunning art! 7 My best, chuck

Anne-Lise Andresen March 5, 2017 at 9:48 AM - Excellent pleiades, Nette - Good luck in the contest - Sunday hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison March 5, 2017 at 9:29 AM Vivid descriptive write Nette I see Jackals and jaguars have been a popular theme:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx