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Jack Spratt

JACK SPRATT Mc Donald's food is unhealthy it's thought Food is food no matter where it's bought When encountering starvation on your traveled road You'll not hearing them saying "McDonalds? I'd rather eat a toad!" People in war zones are thin but not by choice They have no McDonalds to make them fat of course It's not the food making Jack Spratt's wife fat Overeating is where the problem's at Cholesterol and calories are not what it's about It's greedy gobbling like the food will run out Exercising her legs more than her mouth AND Mrs. Jack's rear end then wouldn't be going south

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Gary Bateman

Date: 11/22/2014 4:34:00 PM

Elizabeth, Gary again here!! I forgot to mark the "7" rating in my previous note below. And so . . . here it is this time!! Best Wishes, Gary

Elizabeth Smith
Date: 11/22/2014 5:06:00 PM

Appreciated very much Gary

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/22/2014 4:32:00 PM

Elizabeth, A very funny Couplet here indeed!! I really like how you weaved "McDonald's" into the verses. This one made me chuckle!! A "7" too from me!! Best Always, Gary

Elizabeth Smith
Date: 11/22/2014 4:41:00 PM

Well thanks so much Gary. I'm so glad you liked it. My family looks at me we guilt written on their faces. HaHa

Jan Allison

Date: 11/22/2014 3:09:00 PM

ha ha ha excellent poem and the final couplet is inspirational - great write:-) hugs jan xxx

Elizabeth Smith
Date: 11/22/2014 4:44:00 PM

Thank you Jan. it's great to know you liked it. I was so afraid people would be offended and not take it in fun. Thanks again!