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In the bitter cold I can see my breath, As the snowflakes cool my hot cheeks, Gently settling in my clothes and hair. I am headed to the car with a cake. There'll be a festive party tonight! My boots glide into the powdery fluff; And I wonder if it'll ever stop snowing! The evening sun is setting so very red; And I can hear the whistle of a bird. The night will be filled with laughter; And the evening has scarcely begun. A white rabbit bounds past the trees; In a flurry of movement and snow spray. Drifts now seem to cover all the world. Though I admired the scene only a moment, My chocolate cake has been frosted, too!

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Date: 10/27/2020 5:10:00 PM
Party on,... and read your poem there. It'll be the 'icing on the cake!' Sweetness and Light, Gershon
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/27/2020 8:26:00 PM
The snow covered cake and I should prove to be poetry in motion. :0 It'll be a real boogie night. Laughter and fun, Evelyn
Date: 10/27/2020 11:02:00 AM
Hi Evelyn, You penned such a “chilly” yet lovely write. I can just picture the chocolate cake covered in frost. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/27/2020 3:46:00 PM
Snowy winter scenes are so beautiful to look at. I'm glad you found this one well imagined. Thank you very much. :=)
Date: 10/26/2020 4:12:00 AM
What a lovely reading on this Monday morning! Uplifting! A fave!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/26/2020 10:16:00 AM
I am so pleased by your comment, and honored by your fave. This morning I awoke to the first snowfall of the season. Perfect! :)
Date: 10/26/2020 12:03:00 AM
But I am sure Jack did not spoil the party. Did you have a lovely time? ~~
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/26/2020 10:14:00 AM
Although I arrived looking like a snowman, I did have the most glorious time! :0

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