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Jack Frosting

In the bitter cold I can see my breath,
As the snowflakes cool my hot cheeks,
Gently settling in my clothes and hair.
I am headed to the car with a cake.
There'll be a festive party tonight!
My boots glide into the powdery fluff;
And I wonder if it'll ever stop snowing!
The evening sun is setting so very red;
And I can hear the whistle of a bird.
The night will be filled with laughter;
And the evening has scarcely begun.
A white rabbit bounds past the trees;
In a flurry of movement and snow spray.
Drifts now seem to cover all the world.
Though I admired the scene only a moment,
My chocolate cake has been frosted, too!
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Wolf Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 5:10 PM
Party on,... and read your poem there. It'll be the 'icing on the cake!' Sweetness and Light, Gershon
Buehler Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 8:26 PM
The snow covered cake and I should prove to be poetry in motion. :0 It'll be a real boogie night. Laughter and fun, Evelyn
Y. Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 11:02 AM
Hi Evelyn, You penned such a “chilly” yet lovely write. I can just picture the chocolate cake covered in frost. I enjoyed the read:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
October 27, 2020 at 3:46 PM
Snowy winter scenes are so beautiful to look at. I'm glad you found this one well imagined. Thank you very much. :=)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 4:12 AM
What a lovely reading on this Monday morning! Uplifting! A fave!
Buehler Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 10:16 AM
I am so pleased by your comment, and honored by your fave. This morning I awoke to the first snowfall of the season. Perfect! :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 12:03 AM
But I am sure Jack did not spoil the party. Did you have a lovely time? ~~
Buehler Avatar
October 26, 2020 at 10:14 AM
Although I arrived looking like a snowman, I did have the most glorious time! :0
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