Sara Kendrick Poet Nonet

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Jack Frost Slips In

He came silently upon late fall's 
Northerly air, chilled the mowed grass
Without even a slight care
Turned the season to white
Within a few hours 
One long dark night
Jack Frost killed
Flowers
And ~
Bees
Suffered.
Blue birds gone
Hummers have flown
Butterflies unseen
Disappeared from the scene
Then came back again to play
Jack Frost stopped mourning dove's coo
A temperamental how you do  

Written: December 12, 2020
Contest:Double Nonet
Sponsor: William Kekaula
Poetry form: double reversed nonet
Checked with syllable counter. net...90 total syllables
Checked  with HMS also..Says okay

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Jack Horne January 2, 2021 at 7:10 AM so glad to see this lovely imaginative write was a winner Sara Kendrick January 2, 2021 at 8:29 AM Jack, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Janice Canerdy December 22, 2020 at 6:25 PM CONGRATS on your win with this creative poem, Sara. Janice Sara Kendrick December 23, 2020 at 1:54 PM Janice, Thanks for the visit with congrats. Sara

Marilene Evans December 22, 2020 at 9:04 AM Congrats on your placement, Sara. Beautiful winter write. Sara Kendrick December 22, 2020 at 10:16 AM Marilene, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

William Kelii Kekaula December 21, 2020 at 7:08 PM I failed encountering HMS/PS. Thank you for sharing a part of yourself, Sara, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William Sara Kendrick December 22, 2020 at 4:31 AM William, Thanks for dropping by with congrats on my placement. Sara

Elaine George December 12, 2020 at 2:40 PM What a Masterful Nonet you have written, dear Sara. A winner for sure. ~ Elaine Sara Kendrick December 13, 2020 at 5:57 AM Elaine, Thanks for the visit to my page. One can never know about contest but they give us some fodder to help us think about topics or forms. Sara

Victor Buhagiar December 12, 2020 at 2:16 PM Winter has its ups and downs too. Storms and fine weather alternate. That's life. ~~ Sara Kendrick December 12, 2020 at 2:21 PM Victor, Yes, it seems so here in the south but we always a interlude in the cold, rain, sleet or snow to a few nice days to enjoy the sunshine. The sunshine always helps to improve spirits. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Arturo Michael December 12, 2020 at 10:43 AM You danced to and fro in this nonet...in a carefree manner...Enjoyed the read... Sara Kendrick December 12, 2020 at 11:39 AM Michael, We had a heavy frost then it warmed up and the butterflies and birds came back for awhile. We have had heavy frost most all this week and the butterflies and hummers are definitely gone. I think winter is mostly upon us. Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara