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He came silently upon late fall's Northerly air, chilled the mowed grass Without even a slight care Turned the season to white Within a few hours One long dark night Jack Frost killed Flowers And ~ Bees Suffered. Blue birds gone Hummers have flown Butterflies unseen Disappeared from the scene Then came back again to play Jack Frost stopped mourning dove's coo A temperamental how you do Written: December 12, 2020 Contest:Double Nonet Sponsor: William Kekaula Poetry form: double reversed nonet Checked with syllable counter. net...90 total syllables Checked with HMS also..Says okay

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Jack Horne

Date: 1/2/2021 7:10:00 AM

so glad to see this lovely imaginative write was a winner

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/2/2021 8:29:00 AM

Jack, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/22/2020 6:25:00 PM

CONGRATS on your win with this creative poem, Sara. Janice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/23/2020 1:54:00 PM

Janice, Thanks for the visit with congrats. Sara

Marilene Evans

Date: 12/22/2020 9:04:00 AM

Congrats on your placement, Sara. Beautiful winter write.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/22/2020 10:16:00 AM

Marilene, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. Sara

Hilo Poet

Date: 12/21/2020 7:08:00 PM

I failed encountering HMS/PS. Thank you for sharing a part of yourself, Sara, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/22/2020 4:31:00 AM

William, Thanks for dropping by with congrats on my placement. Sara

Elaine George

Date: 12/12/2020 2:40:00 PM

What a Masterful Nonet you have written, dear Sara. A winner for sure. ~ Elaine

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/13/2020 5:57:00 AM

Elaine, Thanks for the visit to my page. One can never know about contest but they give us some fodder to help us think about topics or forms. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/12/2020 2:16:00 PM

Winter has its ups and downs too. Storms and fine weather alternate. That's life. ~~

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/12/2020 2:21:00 PM

Victor, Yes, it seems so here in the south but we always a interlude in the cold, rain, sleet or snow to a few nice days to enjoy the sunshine. The sunshine always helps to improve spirits. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/12/2020 10:43:00 AM

You danced to and fro in this nonet...in a carefree manner...Enjoyed the read...

Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/12/2020 11:39:00 AM

Michael, We had a heavy frost then it warmed up and the butterflies and birds came back for awhile. We have had heavy frost most all this week and the butterflies and hummers are definitely gone. I think winter is mostly upon us. Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara