Jack Frost Morning

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                                       Jack Frost on mountain
                                      Overlooking hollows hills
                                        Sun_Jack disappears
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A  Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 6:07 PM
Hello, Sara stopping by real quick to ask you to put the word ~sandcastle~ on your contest entry.. I'm still in the middle of judging. Sorry! I just noticed it right now. And i so love your entry. Hopefully you get my notice before i close contest. God bless* SKAT
Freeman Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 12:40 PM
Sara. check out my blog"Frogie" when you get time! Agape, Moses
Roberts Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 11:03 AM
congrats on your win with this wonderful entry
Onclaud Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 6:26 AM
creative 'ku... congrats, sara!! :) nette
Keogh Jr. Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 2:32 PM
Sharp, witty last line. Abrupt but satisfying! Regards and best wishes from Gerard.
Neels Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 10:40 AM
Love the last line Sara, watching the sun disappear.. Congratulations on your win in Irma's contest ;-) Wilma
Freeman Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 9:03 AM
Congratulations Sara, on your worthy poem's recognition. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 8:50 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in skat's contest, sara
Harper Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 8:33 AM
Still love this Sara, congrats on your win!
Villarosa Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 8:05 AM
Sara, congratulations on your well deserved win on this contest. (^_^) Noel.
A   Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 7:45 AM
Good morning Sara,) Congratulations! With your awesome entry! Enjoyed the chills here in this snowy contest,...p.d.
Mannan Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 6:42 AM
Many congratulations dear Sara for this awesome win.
Horsman Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 5:21 AM
reminds me of a distant past, wakening up to see jack on the winows, excellent imagary. Harry
Brown Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 4:10 AM
Big congratulations on your win Sara in S K A T*s contest. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 10:03 PM
back to Jack :) congrats on your win, Sara --sending you some sun rays to warm up your snowy day ;) -- nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 8:59 PM
Congratulations, my friend. Is hollows hills the name of a place that you know of? Luv, Andrea
A  Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 8:54 PM
Sarah, Many congratulations, in my contest, truly I loved it, and thanks for the awesome entry*luv~SKAT
Sweetheart Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 8:47 PM
Congrats Sara on your big win in the Snow contest with this super write my friend.. enjoy tonight with luv... hope all goes well ...
K. Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 11:19 PM
Well peek-a-boo for Jack! Hmm I sure do wonder when he'll manage to pass by our way?! Well I'd be very scared if he does though ;) --thanks for sharing Jack with us Sara :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 9:11 PM
He is there and then he is not. That tricky guy. haha. Cute one, Sara!
Brown Avatar
November 29, 2010 at 9:06 AM
May your week bring you good health,may your heart overflow with love, and may your life bring you amazing inspiration to continue your writing. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and thank you for sharing it Sara. Love, Carol
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November 29, 2010 at 8:06 AM
That Jack wants to stick around many mornings now and I wish he would go. Have a wonderful day Sara. Phyl
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November 29, 2010 at 4:48 AM
And we have such a morning here in the Garden State with icicles hanging from roof tops and a thin sheet of ice on everyone's car this early Monday.. a lovely poem ..good luck if for the contest.. luv that last line about the Sun ..who is my best friend.. especially in Summer.. thankxxx Sara.. for your lovely comment today on my contest entry .. hope u are feeling better my friend..
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November 29, 2010 at 2:07 AM
When the sun appears here in the South, Jack says goodbye. Excellent haiku, Sara! Love, Carolyn
Harper Avatar
November 28, 2010 at 8:59 PM
Love the Sun_Jack, very evocative:)
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