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Jack Frost Morning

. Jack Frost on mountain Overlooking hollows hills Sun_Jack disappears

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/5/2010 6:07:00 PM
Hello, Sara stopping by real quick to ask you to put the word ~sandcastle~ on your contest entry.. I'm still in the middle of judging. Sorry! I just noticed it right now. And i so love your entry. Hopefully you get my notice before i close contest. God bless* SKAT
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Date: 12/5/2010 12:40:00 PM
Sara. check out my blog"Frogie" when you get time! Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/5/2010 11:03:00 AM
congrats on your win with this wonderful entry
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Date: 12/5/2010 6:26:00 AM
creative 'ku... congrats, sara!! :) nette
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Date: 12/2/2010 2:32:00 PM
Sharp, witty last line. Abrupt but satisfying! Regards and best wishes from Gerard.
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Date: 12/2/2010 10:40:00 AM
Love the last line Sara, watching the sun disappear.. Congratulations on your win in Irma's contest ;-) Wilma
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Date: 12/2/2010 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations Sara, on your worthy poem's recognition. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:50:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in skat's contest, sara
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:33:00 AM
Still love this Sara, congrats on your win!
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:05:00 AM
Sara, congratulations on your well deserved win on this contest. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 12/2/2010 7:45:00 AM
Good morning Sara,) Congratulations! With your awesome entry! Enjoyed the chills here in this snowy contest,...p.d.
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Date: 12/2/2010 6:42:00 AM
Many congratulations dear Sara for this awesome win.
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Date: 12/2/2010 5:21:00 AM
reminds me of a distant past, wakening up to see jack on the winows, excellent imagary. Harry
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Date: 12/2/2010 4:10:00 AM
Big congratulations on your win Sara in S K A T*s contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/1/2010 10:03:00 PM
back to Jack :) congrats on your win, Sara --sending you some sun rays to warm up your snowy day ;) -- nikko :)
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Date: 12/1/2010 8:59:00 PM
Congratulations, my friend. Is hollows hills the name of a place that you know of? Luv, Andrea
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Date: 12/1/2010 8:54:00 PM
Sarah, Many congratulations, in my contest, truly I loved it, and thanks for the awesome entry*luv~SKAT
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Date: 12/1/2010 8:47:00 PM
Congrats Sara on your big win in the Snow contest with this super write my friend.. enjoy tonight with luv... hope all goes well ...
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Date: 11/30/2010 11:19:00 PM
Well peek-a-boo for Jack! Hmm I sure do wonder when he'll manage to pass by our way?! Well I'd be very scared if he does though ;) --thanks for sharing Jack with us Sara :)
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Date: 11/29/2010 9:11:00 PM
He is there and then he is not. That tricky guy. haha. Cute one, Sara!
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Date: 11/29/2010 9:06:00 AM
May your week bring you good health,may your heart overflow with love, and may your life bring you amazing inspiration to continue your writing. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and thank you for sharing it Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2010 8:06:00 AM
That Jack wants to stick around many mornings now and I wish he would go. Have a wonderful day Sara. Phyl
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Date: 11/29/2010 4:48:00 AM
And we have such a morning here in the Garden State with icicles hanging from roof tops and a thin sheet of ice on everyone's car this early Monday.. a lovely poem ..good luck if for the contest.. luv that last line about the Sun ..who is my best friend.. especially in Summer.. thankxxx Sara.. for your lovely comment today on my contest entry .. hope u are feeling better my friend..
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Date: 11/29/2010 2:07:00 AM
When the sun appears here in the South, Jack says goodbye. Excellent haiku, Sara! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 11/28/2010 8:59:00 PM
Love the Sun_Jack, very evocative:)
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