Jack Frost Handiwork

Jack Frost handiwork
dabs Vasoline for daybreak....
opaque swirl windshield
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Roberts Avatar
December 5, 2010 at 11:12 AM
lovely haiku, congrats on your win in the contest
Kendrick Avatar
December 4, 2010 at 9:37 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Kendrick Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 3:54 PM
Great way of describing the work of Jack..I am glad that I stopped by to read your great work.I was delighted that you stopped by. read, and commented on my work.Sara
Neels Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 10:55 AM
Congratulations on your win Gerard, your entry made me smile ;-) WN
Devonshire Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 10:23 AM
Congratulations on your win with this terrific series, Gerard! Peace and blessings, Carolyn
Freeman Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 9:21 AM
Congratulations Gerard, on a worthy poem's recognition. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in skat's contest, Gerard
Harper Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 8:47 AM
lol, good change of perspective in this, enjoyed it. Congrats on your win:)
A   Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 7:54 AM
Good morning, Gerard) Congratulations! With your awesome entry! Enjoyed the chills here in this snowy contest,...p.d.
Brown Avatar
December 2, 2010 at 4:18 AM
Big congratulations on your win Gerard in S K A T*s contest. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 9:07 PM
What an interesting one. This gets my vote for most unique, Gerard! Congratulations. LUv, Andrea
A  Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 9:01 PM
Gerard, Many congratulations, in my contest, truly I loved it, and thanks for the awesome entry*luv~SKAT
Sweetheart Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 8:55 PM
Congrats Gerard on your big win int he Snow contest with this super write my friend.. enjoy tonight with lots of luv..
Devonshire Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 9:42 AM
Witty and unique!! Great haiku with a funny image, Gerard. Blessings and peace, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 8:09 AM
Very wonderful haiku with good images, Gerard
Brown Avatar
December 1, 2010 at 7:02 AM
We are having our first laying snowfall this morning in Springfield,Ohio. December 1,2010 what a way to enter this month. It is absolutely beautiful and finds me in good spirits. I have enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Gerard as usual. Looking forward to reading more. Have a wonderful day. Love, Carol
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November 30, 2010 at 8:07 PM
Gerard your creativity is impeccable my friend.. this Haiku is super awesome ..good luck in the contest.. this week I am happily reeling from my GIANTS win.. lets keep it going .. everyone is now predicting the FALCONS for S.B. prize..luv..
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