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Jack Frost

Jack Frost was knocking on my window this morning,
And outside a blanket of white snow lay;
Captivating and dazzling in my backyard, and
Kissing my window with ice lace patterns.

Frozen lovely swirls, painted by Jack Frost,
Rap-a-tap, winter is here, oh that
Object d'art covered with snow is your car,
Shimmering in a coat of ice like frosting.
Turning, I climbed back into my cozy bed. With a sigh!

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November 27, 2015

Acrostic

For the contest, Acrostic: Jack Frost, sponsor, Shadow Hamilton

Fourth Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

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December 12, 2015 at 3:03 PM
BROKEN, Congratulations on your Jack Frost Acrostic. Love SKAT
La France Avatar
December 12, 2015 at 5:33 PM
Skat, thanks for the visit, the congratulations and the love ~
Negron Flores Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 7:56 AM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest BW.
La France Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 3:06 PM
Thank you Nayda ~
A. Sharma Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 9:44 PM
Wonderful acrostic Constance.. congrats on great win!
La France Avatar
December 10, 2015 at 6:18 AM
Upma, thanks for the wonderful and the congrats ~
Roper Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 4:28 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Broken Wing!
La France Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 5:09 PM
Eve, thanks so much for the congratulations ~
Lawless Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 4:24 PM
Oh, yeah, when Jack Frost hits the snooze alarm it is best to go back to bed. Congrats on the win
La France Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 5:10 PM
John, thanks for the comment and the congrats, appreciate ~
Haight Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 3:27 PM
Nice imagery, BW. I especially like the last line! Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
La France Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 5:11 PM
Sandra, thank you for visiting with the nice comment and for the congrats, appreciate so much ~
Allison Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 9:05 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Broken Wings:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 12:45 PM
Jan thanks for the congratulations
Inman Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 9:41 AM
What a wonderful, lazy, pensive mood this sets. I can almost see the gentle smile on your face.
La France Avatar
December 3, 2015 at 3:19 PM
James, thanks for the wonderful comment, I love this poem so much, hopefully it does well in the contest ~
Allison Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 5:25 PM
Lovely imagery Broken wings - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 5:32 PM
Thanks Jan
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