Connie Pachecho Poet Rhyme

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Jack and Jill Slalom

 Jack And Jill Slalom

Jack and Jill went up the snowy hill
To fetch a ride down the slalom trail
In and out of the turns they met a thrill
Like snow bunnies wagging their tail

With each turn thru the banks like a snake
Their skis gather speed faster and faster 
Their bed away from home began to shake 
And just like that, their ride's a disaster

Jack fell down in a heap of laughter
As he lost his balance in a shady bank
Not to be outdone, Jill came tumbling after
Jack's crown's in pieces, and Jill's heart sank

1/16/23

12 Lines of Rhyme - Winter Nature Themed Poetry Contest

5th

Sponsor-Tania Kitchin

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J. Summers January 31, 2023 at 5:47 PM Nice rewrite of the classic. By the way, I appreciated your Memphis poem you posted on your blog. John Connie Pachecho February 2, 2023 at 9:01 PM Thank you!

Linda Alice Fowler January 25, 2023 at 7:02 AM Cute write Connie. Congratulations! :) Connie Pachecho January 25, 2023 at 10:51 AM Thank You!

Tania Kitchin January 24, 2023 at 6:50 PM Connie, a fun winter poem, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Connie Pachecho January 25, 2023 at 10:50 AM Thank You!