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Skiing Accident Beautiful young female skier falling down on mountain slope. ski crashes stock pictures, royalty-free photos & images

Jack And Jill Slalom Jack and Jill went up the snowy hill To fetch a ride down the slalom trail In and out of the turns they met a thrill Like snow bunnies wagging their tail With each turn thru the banks like a snake Their skis gather speed faster and faster Their bed away from home began to shake And just like that, their ride's a disaster Jack fell down in a heap of laughter As he lost his balance in a shady bank Not to be outdone, Jill came tumbling after Jack's crown's in pieces, and Jill's heart sank 1/16/23 12 Lines of Rhyme - Winter Nature Themed Poetry Contest 5th Sponsor-Tania Kitchin

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Date: 1/31/2023 5:47:00 PM
Nice rewrite of the classic. By the way, I appreciated your Memphis poem you posted on your blog. John
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 2/2/2023 9:01:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/25/2023 7:02:00 AM
Cute write Connie. Congratulations! :)
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 1/25/2023 10:51:00 AM
Thank You!
Date: 1/24/2023 6:50:00 PM
Connie, a fun winter poem, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest.
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 1/25/2023 10:50:00 AM
Thank You!

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