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Jack and Jill

Jack and Jill went up the hill and there was my friend SO Totally unclothed and smiling from his rear to his toes He started to dance As if in a trance Wailing, “I've got my love to keep me warm down below!”

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Silent One

Date: 12/12/2017 6:29:00 AM

I could never outdo the master, my friend Master Jack.... OOOhh you should do a kung fu one! Jack went to do some Kung Fu All pumped up he joined the queue Saw the master and got scared Due to the muscles he bared Quickly ran and hid in the loo! I had an alternative ending to that.. but didnt use it.

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/12/2017 6:45:00 AM

OKAY... HANG ON!!! Now I'm getting worried! LOL You are really limerolling!!! BTW my computer is ancient and on it's last bytes! The reason for my recent screw ups!!!Hopefully Santa will bring me a new one! YEE HAW!!!

Silent One

Date: 12/12/2017 5:57:00 AM

HAHAHA.. Laughed out loud at this one!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/12/2017 6:17:00 AM

Keep on keeping on dear friend! Happy to be of service!!!

Silent One

Date: 12/12/2017 5:57:00 AM

SO got ever so cold, for his head was bold. Jack gave him a hug, looked ever so smug! Both fell down the hill, tumbled and rolled!

Jack Ellison
Date: 12/12/2017 6:15:00 AM

YAHOO!!! He's on a limmeroll...the danger is though you mustn't outlim this master! It's against international law!!!