Jack and Jill

Jack and Jill went up the hill and there was my friend SO Totally unclothed and smiling from his rear to his toes He started to dance As if in a trance Wailing, “I've got my love to keep me warm down below!”
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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December 12, 2017 at 6:29 AM
I could never outdo the master, my friend Master Jack.... OOOhh you should do a kung fu one! Jack went to do some Kung Fu All pumped up he joined the queue Saw the master and got scared Due to the muscles he bared Quickly ran and hid in the loo! I had an alternative ending to that.. but didnt use it.
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December 12, 2017 at 6:45 AM
OKAY... HANG ON!!! Now I'm getting worried! LOL You are really limerolling!!! BTW my computer is ancient and on it's last bytes! The reason for my recent screw ups!!!Hopefully Santa will bring me a new one! YEE HAW!!!
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December 12, 2017 at 5:57 AM
SO got ever so cold, for his head was bold. Jack gave him a hug, looked ever so smug! Both fell down the hill, tumbled and rolled!
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December 12, 2017 at 6:15 AM
YAHOO!!! He's on a limmeroll...the danger is though you mustn't outlim this master! It's against international law!!!
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December 12, 2017 at 5:57 AM
HAHAHA.. Laughed out loud at this one!
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December 12, 2017 at 6:17 AM
Keep on keeping on dear friend! Happy to be of service!!!
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