Srinivas Veepuri Poet Rhyme

Jack and Jill

The Rest of the Story Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Miranda Hawley

1st place




Jack and Jill went up the hill
At school, this is what we were taught
But abruptly, Jack proposed Jill with a rose
Jill rejected it after a deep thought.
Respecting each other’s view		
Their friendship they tried to renew
As true friends they lived their lives ever after.

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Linda Alice Fowler March 25, 2024 at 12:12 PM Friendship at its best. Congratulations Srinivas! :) Srinivas Veepuri July 2, 2024 at 1:29 AM thank you, Linda.

Miranda Hawley March 20, 2024 at 4:47 PM At least in your version they remained friends after deciding to NOT marry each other. Congrats on your win in my contest. Srinivas Veepuri July 2, 2024 at 1:33 AM Thank you, Miranda.

Andrea Dietrich March 9, 2024 at 1:30 PM A sweet take on Jack and Jill Srinivas Veepuri March 11, 2024 at 8:23 AM Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.