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Jack and Jill

The Rest of the Story Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Miranda Hawley

1st place




Jack and Jill went up the hill
At school, this is what we were taught
But abruptly, Jack proposed Jill with a rose
Jill rejected it after a deep thought.
Respecting each other’s view		
Their friendship they tried to renew
As true friends they lived their lives ever after. 


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Date: 3/25/2024 12:12:00 PM
Friendship at its best. Congratulations Srinivas! :)
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Srinivas Veepuri
Date: 7/2/2024 1:29:00 AM
thank you, Linda.
Date: 3/20/2024 4:47:00 PM
At least in your version they remained friends after deciding to NOT marry each other. Congrats on your win in my contest.
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Srinivas Veepuri
Date: 7/2/2024 1:33:00 AM
Thank you, Miranda.
Date: 3/9/2024 1:30:00 PM
A sweet take on Jack and Jill
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Srinivas Veepuri
Date: 3/11/2024 8:23:00 AM
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things