Anisha Dutta Poet Limerick

Jack and Jill

JACK  AND JILL

      Jubilant Jack Frost wearing thin torn jacket
        stepped on snow descending from a rocket.
                  chewed snow balls from a jug.
                   Sister Jill gave him hug.
        Jack pushed Jill to snatch her snow ball locket.    
                    
   12/ 19/ 21

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Andrea Dietrich December 24, 2021 at 4:50 PM Almost perfect rhyming, Anisha. Thanks so much for trying my contest. I could just picture Jack snatching at that locket when I read the last line.