Ja You Are So Right

What temprate joy began with

Such afterglow took away

Once forensic dissertation 
dismantling the evidence sends

When massaged vanity and 
guily platitudes are subsidised
overcome by inertial reality

As fraud is replaced and integrity 
lost 

Pondering the cost of what was
gained was lost

And comes with no return policy

But speaking personally from the
here what right have i to complain

If yes that is my signature my 
name undersigned in the contract

Was i not duty bound to have read 
the small print before putting 
pen to paper and held account responsible for my own actions

Because wanted it so much
a willing accomplice was i to be
turn a blind eye and overlook the lie

Until it was patently pointed out to 
me that a hollow victory however
fleeting only lasts a while

But a stain is permanent and
remains on one's record for life

Sold for merely 30 pieces of 
control 

Which then became priceless 
and unattainable to buy back
or own

Until it rears it's ugly head being
abused in some random advertising
advert campaign

The final insult nail in the coffin
thinking

What have i done
What did i do

Why couldn't i just have waited

Why was i not blessed with patience
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Allison Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 12:54 PM
so well penned my friend, so many layers to your thoughts ... adding this powerful piece to my faves for SO many reasons:-) hugs jan xx
Flaherty Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 1:14 PM
Ja Aka Jan Allison You we're and are so right
Flaherty Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 1:05 PM
Soley inspired by your or our Soup Mail conversation Jan. You my favorite for so many reasons to divulge
Proxenos Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 5:19 AM
Hi Chris, your poems have deep meaning my friend - also didn't know the phrase Pyrrihic victory - a stain lasts forever and therefore needs great thought before it is put on paper, a signature perhaps - first weigh up the pros and cons otherwise it could defeat you. - an excellent poem which took courage and honesty to write. Hugs and blessings, Jenn.
Flaherty Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 1:06 PM
Cheers Jen thank you
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December 7, 2020 at 3:50 PM
Don’t mention the war Christopher, this is so good, great honesty shown on your part, I won’t get into the politics, I’d say a Pyrrhic victory, time will tell, terrible mess. Cheers David
Kavanagh  Avatar
December 11, 2020 at 2:18 AM
It is indeed so many victories are indeed of that kind even domestic ones
Flaherty Avatar
December 10, 2020 at 4:26 PM
Cheers David ta i had to look the word or meaning up but i like it very much .
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