Izzy Gumbo Poet I do not know?

Izzy You'Re Dizzy

Izzy you're dizzy you'll need to explain
Exactly HOW many players are in your brain.
~But I can't they won't understand.
~I've tried this before and I lost my clan.
~They know you're here on the land.Anyway.

Explain a day that you can see when Many are the
here and the hear are She. Writing for A WE.
It can be This Way and it is.
News came and spun the biz...
NessV. It'll be May.be Tomorrow.
Five days in the narrows.
row row To be. a Way
Then on the arrows we'll see.

~with respect I ask... are you testing me?
A day in May is only part Way. To a day.
I know my name. \@@/ and YOU're the ham.
A birth defined on an August I AM!g0

And my vision is funny not fuzzy,
Souper sunny in the morning not dizzy...
My name is Susan and my pen's named Izzy.

A system drawn in a perfect way.see
A Wake.yes. A Long ago yes. I Be.
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Loving to write poETry
And how many poems can that really be?
In my brain I asked, Again.

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John Freeman November 23, 2009 at 3:58 PM Ye Izzy, now I am dizzy, from looking for your featured poem"Darkness". Congrats. This poem will certainly do, it's hallo ba lou, makes me wonder about yo. Smile! How many did you say were in there, with you, oh yea, I see, you didn't know which one was you. Just yell fire and see which one comes out. Oh well anyway, Sincere, Love, Moses This has got to be your best one yet.

L'Nass Shango May 25, 2009 at 4:28 AM It is funny, I find your write so original and fresh ... and behind the sprite I see a mystic seriousness, the archetype reaching for jubilee

Brian Anderson May 22, 2009 at 12:47 AM izzy i think the world would be alot better if we all were a bit more d(izzy).

Michael Jordan May 20, 2009 at 3:41 PM Izzy I loved the title and the poem - Original all the way - I love that - Hey don't trip about the comment thing ok - I'm not the type who would let such a small mistake change the beauty of my day so to speak - All is take as it was meant - Respectfully - I'll put this in my favs I do believe - Have a wonderful day ok - God Bless, MJ

Izzy Gumbo May 20, 2009 at 12:40 PM Oh thanks everyone! I do appreciate the comments and Deborah, honey, there is never any logic with me :) It's lovely really. lol.

Debbie Guzzi May 20, 2009 at 12:37 PM goodness such a blither, you put me in a dither Light & Love & a bit more logic?? gah! me asking for logic (duck)

Allan Granstrom May 20, 2009 at 6:22 AM You make me dizzy Mr.Izzy. I like your zany side. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem also. I really appreciate it. It's strange how writing a poem helps you purge some of the pain.

Sebastian Aaron Baez May 20, 2009 at 5:39 AM Susan? Meow?

Jack Reed May 19, 2009 at 9:27 PM Is this a riddle... I was born in Aug. and in the morning... I like your style.. I will keep up when I can... I am a busy man now days... It seems I am writing for everyone.. Your friend in poetry JackReed3...

Charlene Bird May 19, 2009 at 8:57 PM Izzy, you have a fresh creative spin on your fun poems.