Skat A Poet Free verse

I-W-B-S-G

I.W.B.S.G.

It Would Be So Great
If she could feel
It Would Be So Great
If she had a strong will
It Would Be So Great
To avoid the hate
It Would Be So Great
If shad a little hope
It Would Be So Great
If she hadn't lost faith
It Would Be So Great
Not to get lost in a mental state 
It Would Be So Great
To find herself again
It Would Be So Great
If she had true friends
It Would Be So Great
If you know who you are?

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Richard Lamoureux February 20, 2017 at 8:16 AM You have been here a long time. Hopefully you will start writing again an adding flavour to the soup.

Andrea Dietrich June 26, 2015 at 9:16 AM Skat , am out the door in 15 min. I feel like Linda Sweetheart when she was posting blogs even at the time she said she was marrying in a few minutes. hahaha. Remember that!! I'll miss ya, lady!!! But maybe I will be on here from my in-laws! Oh, and I like seeing this poem again! Nice and short ones are my faves!

Skat A May 27, 2015 at 6:50 PM .. This poem needs work, sorry for the rude interruption, I will make changes during the summer, if you want to lend a hand please send soup mail to my inbox, I was beginner when I posted this poem..... HUGS SKAT. ...

Skat A May 27, 2015 at 6:49 PM this is awful...lol

Andrea Dietrich October 14, 2013 at 11:55 PM Hi, SKAT!!!

Poet Destroyer A July 7, 2013 at 12:11 AM no!

Edmond Ornelas September 4, 2012 at 2:44 PM Congad. very strong poem Hope she finds herself

Good Night September 3, 2012 at 8:21 PM gud poem its harde to find oneselfs nice job

Lynette Chachere May 30, 2010 at 4:32 PM all of these things would make someone into a completely different person.being negative about everything will get you no where.have a great day Irma, -Always&Forever Lynette

James Marshall Goff March 25, 2010 at 7:21 PM very cool indeed! Irma! had fun reading this art! jimbo

Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2010 at 7:13 AM and this is a GREAT read, as always, Irma. About the Brian in my limerick, he is not a real big friend of mine, but just a nice guy in another poetry group who I noticed sometimes liked to offer advice to the ladies when they had problems. luv, Andrea

Royal Trevino March 6, 2010 at 6:14 PM it would be so great!! good write irma... enjoyed