Ivory

I ncandescently shining white V elvet soft to the touch O val shaped shells of oysters R ings embedded in walnut wood Y ellowing slowly as it ages written 09/02/2013 contest I LOVE FIVE!/ A FIVE LETTER WORD ACROSTIC |

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/20/2013 9:57:00 PM

Hi Shadow,, congratulations with your awesome Acrostic poem *** LOVE ***LINDA

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/21/2013 5:10:00 AM

hi Linda Ty for reading and enjoying have a great weekend Shadow x smile

Skat A

Date: 9/20/2013 4:05:00 PM

Shadow, , Congratulations, with your awesome and fun Acrostic ........ luv ~SKAT~

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/21/2013 5:12:00 AM

hey Skat and ty dear lady hope you enjoy your weekend Shadow x smile

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/16/2013 7:32:00 AM

Beautiful work..congrats. BG

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/16/2013 8:13:00 AM

hi BG and Ty for reading Shadow x smile

Karen Anglesey

Date: 9/16/2013 5:35:00 AM

I enjoyed this very creative poem. Well done and congrats on your win :)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/16/2013 8:14:00 AM

hi Karen ty so much so kind of you Shadow x smile

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/15/2013 8:47:00 AM

A multilayered and precious object well spoken! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/16/2013 8:15:00 AM

hi Debbie and Ty for a lovely review and congrats Shadow x smile

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/15/2013 8:21:00 AM

Congratulations on this creative descriptive poem taking high honors Shadow. Truly an outstanding acrostic!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/16/2013 8:16:00 AM

Connie hi what a nice review Ty so much Shadow x smile

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/15/2013 6:58:00 AM

beautiful description of the color ivory....congrats on your win!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/16/2013 8:17:00 AM

hi Sandra ty for such encouraging review and congrats Shadow x smile

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2013 3:35:00 AM

Probably one of the best in the contest for Imagery to show this cool color. Loved it. Congrats!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/15/2013 5:59:00 AM

hi Andrea and Ty both for contest and placing. It was fun glad you liked Ivory Shadow x smile

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/15/2013 3:24:00 AM

nice one Linda Congrats on your win.Morgan

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/15/2013 6:00:00 AM

hi Morgen and Ty nice to see you on here Shadow x smile

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/2/2013 9:52:00 PM

Lovely work dearest.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/4/2013 4:48:00 PM

dear friend and mentor I am glad it pleased you Ty ( the book "Poets in the Spotlight" will be out on shelves in about 6 weeks it has my poem "Albatross" in it) Shadow x smile

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/2/2013 9:23:00 PM

Nice expressions on the aging of ivory, Good luck

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 9/4/2013 4:43:00 PM

Ty Dr Ram I enjoyed visiting your work too. Ty for gl wishes Shadow x smile