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I'Ve Succumbed

My body failing to be young My strongest past years I have sung Bruises they appear Cancer is a fear Some unexpressed pains on my tongue First fingers then wrists do succumb An old lady I have become New knees and some hips Why not some new lips? My age has me simply undone Written: 7-28-2019

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Date: 8/19/2019 2:30:00 PM
Growing old is not fun. Liked your limerick! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 8/18/2019 8:49:00 PM
oh my, a bit sad for a limerick, but yes, it 's so true!! I wish you had only submitted the second of these two. THen you would have scored higher, Jeanne. Congrats . your meter and humor in the second one were wonderful.
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Date: 7/30/2019 5:52:00 AM
When you get those new lips, please update your photograph, and make them big ones. I love it when the movie stars do that.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/30/2019 9:37:00 AM
and I'll lift my face too!
Date: 7/29/2019 2:05:00 PM
My sympathies, Jeanne (if this is biographical) … You've certainly described the symptoms well. Best of luck in the contest! :) gw
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/29/2019 4:40:00 PM
Unfortunately it is!
Date: 7/29/2019 7:34:00 AM
I'm on my way! Great write. Good luck in the contest! xomo
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/29/2019 9:22:00 AM
Some days I just can't believe!
Date: 7/29/2019 6:44:00 AM
Very well penned, Jeanne. Panagiota
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