Running Wolves Poet Rhyme

I'Ve Been Bitten

I've been bitten
yes I'm smitten
by that freakin
bug of lore
that
nasty
sneaky
critter
somehow made it
through my door

Now I'm feelin
woozy
like a man
on to much boozy
next came
warm and fuzzy
dang
these symptoms
are a doozy

Dang it
I've been bitten
yep truly
I am smitten
by that
nasty
sneaky
critter
that's a
love bugs bite
for sure

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Robert Kinard December 20, 2019 at 7:25 AM That bug must of got me when I wasn't look. Trouble the is that it bit me twice, I love my wife and I love poetry. Thank you sir. Running Wolves January 20, 2020 at 10:20 AM Please accept my humble apology for the late response to your comment. I'm not sure how I missed it, but I truly thank you very much...

Jean Bush December 19, 2019 at 8:58 PM Ouch! Will not go into the strange things I've been bitten by. Running Wolves December 20, 2019 at 6:16 AM Oh my now my curiosity is peaking lol

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 12, 2019 at 8:10 AM Hah! Delightful fun penning! Enjoyed! Thank you. xomo Running Wolves December 12, 2019 at 8:26 AM Thank you, this was fun to write and it happened on a spur of the moment lol

Brandy Nicole December 10, 2019 at 11:50 AM Such a wonderful feeling indeed, being bitten in this way!! By the Love Bug. Sounds like you truly are "Smitten" My heart is smiling. :) Brandy Running Wolves December 10, 2019 at 1:02 PM Naaaah.. Its just a poetic work. I've been on my own for 10 years now.

Jenish Somadas December 9, 2019 at 4:12 AM Bitten by a love bug is a serious case.. You will lose your sleep in no time.. And will start writing beautiful poems like this.. Running Wolves December 9, 2019 at 6:41 PM Thank you ever so kindly

Caren Krutsinger December 9, 2019 at 3:56 AM It is a fun write, and a humorous read. Well done, Robert! Liked this ever so much! Running Wolves December 9, 2019 at 6:41 PM You are way to kind dear Lady