I'Ve Been Bitten

I've been bitten
yes I'm smitten
by that freakin
bug of lore
that
nasty
sneaky
critter
somehow made it
through my door

Now I'm feelin
woozy
like a man
on to much boozy
next came
warm and fuzzy
dang
these symptoms
are a doozy

Dang it
I've been bitten
yep truly
I am smitten
by that
nasty
sneaky
critter
that's a
love bugs bite
for sure

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Date: 12/20/2019 7:25:00 AM
That bug must of got me when I wasn't look. Trouble the is that it bit me twice, I love my wife and I love poetry. Thank you sir.
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Running Wolves
Date: 1/20/2020 10:20:00 AM
Please accept my humble apology for the late response to your comment. I'm not sure how I missed it, but I truly thank you very much...
Date: 12/19/2019 8:58:00 PM
Ouch! Will not go into the strange things I've been bitten by.
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/20/2019 6:16:00 AM
Oh my now my curiosity is peaking lol
Date: 12/12/2019 8:10:00 AM
Hah! Delightful fun penning! Enjoyed! Thank you. xomo
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/12/2019 8:26:00 AM
Thank you, this was fun to write and it happened on a spur of the moment lol
Date: 12/10/2019 11:50:00 AM
Such a wonderful feeling indeed, being bitten in this way!! By the Love Bug. Sounds like you truly are "Smitten" My heart is smiling. :) Brandy
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/10/2019 1:02:00 PM
Naaaah.. Its just a poetic work. I've been on my own for 10 years now.
Date: 12/9/2019 4:12:00 AM
Bitten by a love bug is a serious case.. You will lose your sleep in no time.. And will start writing beautiful poems like this..
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/9/2019 6:41:00 PM
Thank you ever so kindly
Date: 12/9/2019 3:56:00 AM
It is a fun write, and a humorous read. Well done, Robert! Liked this ever so much!
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Running Wolves
Date: 12/9/2019 6:41:00 PM
You are way to kind dear Lady
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