Its You That I Want

it's you that i want,
 
i want nobody else
though your best-friend has lovely eyes
and adorable features,
her face is full of light,
her heart the softest
of all hearts,
her touch angelic,
her walk majestic
the look in her eyes,
like the Aurora Borealis.
 
but its you that i want.
 
it's you that i want
i want nobody else,
your sister maybe:
with her petal soft skin,
hair like Rapunzel's
always attach me to her,
her face like Cleopatra,
makes her the most adorable,
being i should be with,
 
but its you that i want.
 
it's you that i want
i don't want nobody else
i have many ladies on my list
those with big hips,
soft lips,
heavenly eyes,
petal touches,
models,
actors,
colleagues,
sisters,
mum,
nieces,
 
but its you that i want,
 
being with you is like:
watching the Victoria falls,
walking with you is like,
scaling Mt. Everest,
knowing that you are mine is like
owning the Harbor of Rio de Janeiro
waking next to you is like
waking on the Great Barrier Reef
in your eyes i see
the northern lights
when you hold me
my heart imitates the Paricutin
and when they see us together is like
watching the Grand Canyon.
 
to me you are the 8th wonder of the world
 
hence its you that i want.. . .
 
. . . ......it's you that i want. . . .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kimathi Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 5:20 AM
Greetings Jim. A deep,well-plotted piece indeed!!! ;-)
Tsiluma Avatar
September 15, 2012 at 1:26 AM
Lovely write Jim! Your arguments are very convincing. Nicely developed theme!
Agunga Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 7:22 AM
THANK YOU for the comment
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 6:20 AM
Are you sure your are not just saying that? good write Jim and welcome to the soup xx
Dalton Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 11:11 PM
Thank you for sharing! and Welcome I am still kind of new too. like the way you tranced you desire for her above these beautiful lines adorable features, her face is full of light, her heart the softest of all hearts, her touch angelic, her walk majestic the look in her eyes, like the Aurora Borealis.
Brown Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 1:50 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jim. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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September 10, 2012 at 1:36 PM
you sweet talker you! you describe the other women with such beauty can't be mad at you for that like i'd like lol but the description of the one that you want was just breathtaking ,love this one,....p.d.
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