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Its You That I Want

it's you that i want, i want nobody else though your best-friend has lovely eyes and adorable features, her face is full of light, her heart the softest of all hearts, her touch angelic, her walk majestic the look in her eyes, like the Aurora Borealis. but its you that i want. it's you that i want i want nobody else, your sister maybe: with her petal soft skin, hair like Rapunzel's always attach me to her, her face like Cleopatra, makes her the most adorable, being i should be with, but its you that i want. it's you that i want i don't want nobody else i have many ladies on my list those with big hips, soft lips, heavenly eyes, petal touches, models, actors, colleagues, sisters, mum, nieces, but its you that i want, being with you is like: watching the Victoria falls, walking with you is like, scaling Mt. Everest, knowing that you are mine is like owning the Harbor of Rio de Janeiro waking next to you is like waking on the Great Barrier Reef in your eyes i see the northern lights when you hold me my heart imitates the Paricutin and when they see us together is like watching the Grand Canyon. to me you are the 8th wonder of the world hence its you that i want.. . . . . . ......it's you that i want. . . .

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Date: 4/4/2016 5:20:00 AM
Greetings Jim. A deep,well-plotted piece indeed!!! ;-)
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Date: 9/15/2012 1:26:00 AM
Lovely write Jim! Your arguments are very convincing. Nicely developed theme!
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Jim Agunga
Date: 9/20/2012 7:22:00 AM
THANK YOU for the comment
Date: 9/12/2012 6:20:00 AM
Are you sure your are not just saying that? good write Jim and welcome to the soup xx
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Date: 9/10/2012 11:11:00 PM
Thank you for sharing! and Welcome I am still kind of new too. like the way you tranced you desire for her above these beautiful lines adorable features, her face is full of light, her heart the softest of all hearts, her touch angelic, her walk majestic the look in her eyes, like the Aurora Borealis.
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Date: 9/10/2012 1:50:00 PM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jim. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/10/2012 1:36:00 PM
you sweet talker you! you describe the other women with such beauty can't be mad at you for that like i'd like lol but the description of the one that you want was just breathtaking ,love this one,....p.d.
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