It's Winter

Frozen lake-water, Damp eyelids,misty breath, Foggy-streets' dim lights, Silvery-green valleys, Leafless trees,concrete boughs.
written on: 7-11-2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Thapa Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 9:57 AM
Too good you must be a pro !
Bantawa Avatar
May 17, 2014 at 10:49 PM
thanks for stopping by. good day!
Sirak Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 7:34 AM
Wonderful. love the mixture of nature and man made.
Bantawa Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 7:42 AM
thanks for the kind comment.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 7:46 AM
Phantasmagoric painting of winter's mornings!
Bantawa Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 9:09 AM
thank you.
Dunn Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 5:59 PM
Even though this seemed short it was well thought out and well written thank you for sharing a beautiful thought of your imagination with me tonight. and thank you for your congrades fellow souper.
Bantawa Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 9:07 AM
thank you and you are welcome!
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 4:32 PM
You quite depicted a winter scene . the concrete boughs was an awesome image.
Bantawa Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 9:09 AM
Love. hugs and thanks!
Andresen Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 5:31 AM
:) :)
Bantawa Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 9:08 AM
:-):-)
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