Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Rhyme

Notes About The Poem

- It's True, It Smells -

Memories of happiness does have a smell
This smells of dried grass, horse and cow

- With goals
and open soul -

Amazing stunts and pirouettes in free fall
A dangerous game, jumping from the rafters

- Let the game spin
highest jump will win -

Boys and girls on the high loft
Chris kissed Lena`s warm rosy lips

- Young bliss
virgin kiss -

Hidden in the hay, the cat gave birth to three kittens
A memory from the country life

- The fairest
oh, my dearest -










17.12.2016
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Liam Mcdaid January 1, 2017 at 4:00 PM i am a farmers son reared with memories that will last excellent pen anne lise beautifully painted Anne-Lise Andresen January 2, 2017 at 2:38 AM - I grew up in the countryside, but not as farmers daughter - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maurice Rigoler December 23, 2016 at 3:19 PM You took me back to my childhood. I lived on a farm with my grandparents. Hi Anne Liese! It's been a while. Thank you for reading my poem about the hawk, a favorite bird. I have written a few "serious" poems about this predatory bird. Hope you are well. / M Anne-Lise Andresen December 25, 2016 at 6:55 AM - Glad I brought pleasant memories, Maurice :)) - Thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janet Grace December 21, 2016 at 9:59 AM All I can say is I was raised on a farm and all the things you desccribed I have lived. Thanks for the trip back in time to my youth. Anne-Lise Andresen December 21, 2016 at 12:17 PM - Thanks Janet, for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter December 20, 2016 at 8:38 PM Very beautiful Rhymed verses Anne- Lise!:) Beautifully painted piece full of unforgettable sweet memories, dear friend:) Just awesome! Enjoyed it! A 7! Wishing you and your loved ones a Very Merry and safe Christmas full of love, joy, happiness n' peace, and a Very Happy and Prosperous New Year 2017!Sending you my love and prayers.Best wishes to you always!Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs!D Anne-Lise Andresen December 21, 2016 at 4:03 AM - Merry Christmas, Dorian :) - Thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso December 20, 2016 at 1:36 PM Anyone who has spent time on a farm will love this as did I! Merry Christmas! Anne-Lise Andresen December 20, 2016 at 1:45 PM - Fun in the country :) - Merry Christmas :) - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Arthur :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus December 20, 2016 at 1:30 PM This is beautiful, Anne-Lise, especially since it takes me back to my childhood, most of which I spent on my grandfather's farm. Now you have awakened so many lovely memories!! Those were the days...hard to explain to today's children what they are missing! Best regards and hugs ~ paul Anne-Lise Andresen December 20, 2016 at 1:39 PM - That was nice, Paul :)... glad I brought you to pleasant memories :)) - Thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lim'Rik Flats December 20, 2016 at 9:59 AM :-) The title made me smile - what was I thinking about? Munchy memories except, I always got the big itchies! Musta been allergic to that stuff:-). So much fun to play in, such a pleasant poem with undertones of youthful longing. Enjoyed a buncha! Huggadoodles ~ john Anne-Lise Andresen December 20, 2016 at 12:56 PM - Nice to think about .... old memories ... stuff that children today will never experience ... the time is different, John - Thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Deborah Burch December 19, 2016 at 10:01 AM Lol!! I still play on the bales of hay;and barn cats are born; horse manure... love that smell... well done Anna-Lise!!! Big Hugggs. Deb Anne-Lise Andresen December 19, 2016 at 11:51 AM - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Deb :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kevin Leake December 19, 2016 at 8:04 AM You've got all the right ingredients here Anne, A delightful poem Best Wishes Kevin Anne-Lise Andresen December 19, 2016 at 11:50 AM - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Kevin :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kyle Kriticos December 19, 2016 at 7:35 AM This is beautiful and indeed , a ray of sunshine Anne-Lise Andresen December 19, 2016 at 11:50 AM - Kyle, thanks for friendly visits and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel December 19, 2016 at 6:28 AM How sweet, lovely memories indeed:) I remember the day we played on hay left us with minute cuts and bruises later, but we did enjoy:) Anne-Lise Andresen December 19, 2016 at 11:49 AM :))) - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong December 19, 2016 at 5:33 AM I remember fondly playing on the bales of hay stacked up...a, pretend fort. I enjoyed the memories your poem envoked. Lovely! 7 ; ) Anne-Lise Andresen December 19, 2016 at 11:49 AM - Thanks for friendly visits a 7 and comments, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian December 18, 2016 at 8:45 PM How sweet, Sunshine....Delightful. A certain scent can bring back memories...Loved this write, dear. Hugs Anne-Lise Andresen December 19, 2016 at 4:49 AM - Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Eileen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues December 18, 2016 at 1:36 PM Lovely memory! Anne-Lise Andresen December 18, 2016 at 1:58 PM - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud December 17, 2016 at 3:48 PM your norway glides in many frames of exciting scenes.. what a beauty, anne... happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen December 18, 2016 at 8:04 AM - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May December 17, 2016 at 3:41 PM Beautifully penned Sunshine...Wonderful memories... Anne-Lise Andresen December 18, 2016 at 8:04 AM - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)