Its Too Quiet

Its too Quiet 
the cold has seeped deep
I feel Anxious
has my blood vein freeze,
There are no thoughts that 
I could think of,
I visit  the same dream 
I had left from, and
there is nothing to come back 
In this free fall of exquisite.

I don’t know if 
it will stop me from ,
reaching a place I look for,
I don’t want the Noise
but I think I am one thing short,
In all the silence
there can be one beat high.
     Its too Quiet
Although its  not 
like I cant hear the Rain Fall,
but strangely it fails to 
make my heart drop,
Maybe I have called for resistance.

I Enjoy  time
Moments of free smiles
kindling with ones own norms
staying silent when Eyes play
the familiar  thoughts,
Did I let it happen
I dwell on persistence 
what's with the precipitous change?
The cooking pot 
who's aware what's being made,
The guessing game 
has been shut for all Scrounging brains.
What shall come 
will happen to be a Surprise;
even with all our Eyes laid on
It will keep Fooling 
until it Arrives.

The habit of Absence ;
don’t held it tight,
there is an Infinity building;
Once its this Quiet.

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Date: 11/25/2020 4:27:00 AM
Deeply emotive poem of your thoughts and feelings, you expressed it so well Sonali..
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Sonali Thakur
Date: 5/3/2025 12:49:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my work .
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