Its the Fourth

It’s the fourth - fireworks; the fizzle of stars.
The colorful display of power of the people —
waving of the red, white and blue; freedom
rings, slowly, building to a crescendo
to include all the melting pot called the USA.

Resilience and fortitude; weathered the wilderness
where an unlearned cabin-patch man snatches
every book his hands can capture, then captures
our hearts, tall, even taller with his top hat —
a silk black band added after his beloved son
Willie dies. Lincoln, a man who united us

in the favor of freedom, freedom that frees the pandemic
of slavery, the dark history of whips and chains. And 
furthermore we ask, “Why oh why…”
when headway is made do men continue to suffer
and hang from trees, crosses burned.

And all good men suffer with them, the agony of evil —
it was to be stamped out, and the white hoods snatched
off crazytown. If one truly believes in God, then he loves,
not hates, his fellowman and each wants the best for him —
of education, family, boundless freedom and desires
to hold hands — building a chain, not of rust, but of
trust. And we sing out, “God bless America.”

I visited the WWII museum in New Orleans. A flat map
showed the takeover of the world by forces of evil. Almost
the entire world of East and West lit up — it took my breath
away. What power quenched the burning furnaces, the
torture of peoples? When America stood up, under
the banner of “In God We Trust,” the hellfires, not

easily squelched, the brave, the spirit of the wilderness
gave all, they fought to set the captives free. Men, in general,
are not perfect but the fight for freedom is a worthy cause
and the sanity of a sound mind, a candlelight vigil of veracity
is one to be stoked. Do we continue

to fight each other, dividing, drawing lines, or pull
each other into big sloppy hugs and love’s kisses.
God bless this union called America; God’s mercy
invites us to sing with one voice; freedom’s choice.

It’s the fourth - fireworks; the fizzle of stars.
The colorful display of power of the people —
waving of the red, white and blue; freedom
rings, slowly, building to a crescendo
to include all the melting pot called the USA.

7/4/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 7/10/2020 5:12:00 PM
This was such a favorite line for me. I am putting this poem into my favorites, Kim. "d the white hoods snatched off crazytown."
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2020 5:19:00 PM
Thanks! My muse...
Date: 7/4/2020 5:01:00 PM
Powerful verse Kim, well written Happy 4th july, enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2020 6:18:00 PM
Happy 4th, my friend!
Date: 7/4/2020 1:32:00 PM
Well said! God shed his showers on Honolulu this morning encouraging Americans to STAY HOME! Aloha! Rico
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2020 1:33:00 PM
Thank you, Rico! Aloha and Happy 4th (a different kind of Summer)
Date: 7/4/2020 11:11:00 AM
Nicely penned, Kim, Happy 4th of July! Hugs, John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2020 11:12:00 AM
Thank you, John! Happy 4th! Hugs
Date: 7/4/2020 8:52:00 AM
Spirited and inspiring piece Kim. Happy Fourth from a your northern neighbour dear friend <3 xomo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/4/2020 9:25:00 AM
Love you neighbor! So much!
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