It's Supposed To Be An Awesome Peak
She's been dreaming of
a beyond compare life,
like Mayon volcano's
stunning shape,
but this just sickly sticks
in her bold eyes
while staring at
the fabulous view
that she's been painted
perfectly
for decades, to be the best
yet only turns into a
scary sketch.
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