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It's Supposed To Be An Awesome Peak

She's been dreaming of
a beyond compare life,
like Mayon volcano's
stunning shape,

but this just sickly sticks
in her bold eyes
while staring at
the fabulous view

that she's been painted
perfectly
for decades, to be the best
yet only turns into a
scary sketch.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 8/30/2020 3:45:00 AM
A gorgeous metaphoric write Maris. Well penned.
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Date: 8/30/2020 4:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Caren. I appreciate it.:)

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