Its Simple Really

Pure love is
two people
sharing one dream
while the other sleeps

Its simple really....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Merryman Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 6:01 PM
Ooh, I like this Kurt. Congrats on your win. Kim
Song Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 8:42 AM
Great write, Kurt...this says "complete devotion" to me. Savin for my treasure trove of favorites...Congrats to u, again. Gwendolen
Kohls Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 2:35 PM
thanks Gwengoler..happy holidays Kurt.
Neels Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 4:39 AM
Awesome write Kurt, congratulations on your win in the contest :) Wilma
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 1:43 AM
OOps is that three people? well written cangratulations
Dietrich Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 9:31 PM
Interesting thought, Kurt!! Congrats on your win.
Guzzi Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 5:01 PM
hmmm that makes 3 people [peer] okies congrad's Light & Love
Williams Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 2:51 PM
Kurt congrats on your win..David
Brown Avatar
December 12, 2011 at 12:02 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Fours And Fives" contest Kurt. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 8:37 AM
this definitely made me smile ^_^-- yup it really could be that simple ;) very nice-- nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 9:58 PM
Hey, this is really nice, Kurt. Or also two people dreaming the same dream together! Luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 7:35 AM
Great words Kurt... a definite keeper for those in LUV... enjoyed this happy Sunday.. and I would call this one Free Verse rather than I don't know..it helps to present your poetry in a better light when u list the form luv.. enjoy your happy Sunday...
Nutter Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 4:48 AM
It is simple, life is what becomes hard. Excellent write, I enjoyed he read.
Neels Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 3:58 AM
I like your concept of pure love Kurt, great title as well.. :) Wilma
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