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It’s Right There

Open the window click off the electric sun a view of Heaven

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Silent One

Date: 1/31/2024 12:13:00 PM

electric sun... great arrangement of words..

Karen Jones

Date: 1/31/2024 12:53:00 AM

Cool beans like that line as well click off..

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/31/2024 10:42:00 AM

Thanks Karen

Deb M

Date: 1/31/2024 12:03:00 AM

Just lovely Jerry….click of the electric sun l like that! Debx

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/31/2024 10:41:00 AM

Thank Deb.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/30/2024 7:40:00 PM

I like that line -- 'click off the electric sun.' Perfect for my latest project in Chinatown. -- Tan Ing Par-lor

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/31/2024 10:34:00 AM

I like it. Owned by I.M. Brown.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/30/2024 7:19:00 PM

Sweet, Jerry!

Jerry Brotherton
Date: 1/31/2024 10:32:00 AM

Thanks, Kim. Have a wonderful day, my friend.