It’s Right There

    Open the window
click off the electric sun
    a view of Heaven
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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January 31, 2024 at 12:13 PM
electric sun... great arrangement of words..
Jones Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 12:53 AM
Cool beans like that line as well click off..
Brotherton Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 10:42 AM
Thanks Karen
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January 31, 2024 at 12:03 AM
Just lovely Jerry….click of the electric sun l like that! Debx
Brotherton Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 10:41 AM
Thank Deb.
Wolf Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 7:40 PM
I like that line -- 'click off the electric sun.' Perfect for my latest project in Chinatown. -- Tan Ing Par-lor
Brotherton Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 10:34 AM
I like it. Owned by I.M. Brown.
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January 30, 2024 at 7:19 PM
Sweet, Jerry!
Brotherton Avatar
January 31, 2024 at 10:32 AM
Thanks, Kim. Have a wonderful day, my friend.
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