It's Raining

It’s Raining

Rain

The stones
The leaves
Grass blades
The windowpane

The tiles
The roofs
The clouds
The skies

Are talking
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 5, 2008 at 9:49 AM
Great last line to tie all the sounds together!! What are "roves" (after tiles above)? I have this metal vent on my roof that really clatters when a big storm comes ... actually, its clatter is rather comforting ... no rain today, just freezing cold clear and sunny ....
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December 4, 2008 at 12:40 PM
Colin this is short and clever. I think lyou were emotionally drained from writing Christies poem lol. I thought it was very funny how lyou manage to saly thing's in a respectful condition of fermented vodka and fish. Great imagination you have. Your friend Michael
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