It's Raining

It’s Raining Rain The stones The leaves Grass blades The windowpane The tiles The roofs The clouds The skies Are talking

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Sue Mason

Date: 12/5/2008 9:49:00 AM

Great last line to tie all the sounds together!! What are "roves" (after tiles above)? I have this metal vent on my roof that really clatters when a big storm comes ... actually, its clatter is rather comforting ... no rain today, just freezing cold clear and sunny ....

Michael Torres

Date: 12/4/2008 12:40:00 PM

Colin this is short and clever. I think lyou were emotionally drained from writing Christies poem lol. I thought it was very funny how lyou manage to saly thing's in a respectful condition of fermented vodka and fish. Great imagination you have. Your friend Michael