It's Quiet, Suffering

it's quiet,
suffering, it's a quiet &
limp thing. questions
open like books
unread, under(stood),
dusty splintered shelf.
unable to maintain the
self contained war 
silent film overlayed
descriptions over &
overplayed; the maid
refusing to leave,
can't breathe can't accept
status position to be
human-
it's quiet, suffering-
something not to be
spoken of.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
June 8, 2010 at 6:07 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Rachel. Have a beautiful day. Love, Carol
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June 7, 2010 at 6:04 PM
enjoyed, sad poem, welcome to poetry soup!!
A  Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 4:47 PM
STRONG WRITE, ENJOYED THE READ. -IRMA
Kendrick Avatar
June 7, 2010 at 4:42 PM
Interesting ideas about life that you have penned in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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