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It's Quiet, Suffering

it's quiet, suffering, it's a quiet & limp thing. questions open like books unread, under(stood), dusty splintered shelf. unable to maintain the self contained war silent film overlayed descriptions over & overplayed; the maid refusing to leave, can't breathe can't accept status position to be human- it's quiet, suffering- something not to be spoken of.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/8/2010 6:07:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Rachel. Have a beautiful day. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/7/2010 6:04:00 PM
enjoyed, sad poem, welcome to poetry soup!!
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:47:00 PM
STRONG WRITE, ENJOYED THE READ. -IRMA
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Date: 6/7/2010 4:42:00 PM
Interesting ideas about life that you have penned in this one..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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