It's Over

IT’S OVER
She did not like him at first sight; He seemed to her a bit uptight, Overdressed The second date, though still not good, His little faults she felt she could Overlook. So, on date three, what can I say? She took him home and let him stay Overnight But she found, in the course of time, The fellow was not worth a dime. Overdrawn She decided, now she knew him, He was useless, so she threw him Overboard 5th May 2020 Compounding Word Verse contest Sponsor - Joseph May
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Marcum Wong Avatar
May 24, 2020 at 12:11 PM
I loved the clever use of this unique form created by my friend Margaret. It is a challenging form for many. Congratulations on your deserving First Place Bryn! xxoo
May Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 7:16 PM
She had to throw him out, Congrats on your win Bryn
Mishra Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 6:18 PM
Congratulations on your top placement Bryn! A captivating entry :)
Watt Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 5:31 PM
Bryn, a captivating tale of a brief fling. I was sorry when the poem was 'over'. Congratulations on your top placement for this very clever write ~ John
Drowley Avatar
May 23, 2020 at 3:19 PM
'Bryn, Congratulations on your win! Very well done. David'
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May 23, 2020 at 2:54 PM
CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Bryn! Janice
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