Becky Takacs Poet Free verse

It's Over

You,
Holding,
Another woman's,
Hand.

Kissing,
Her,
Upon,
Her cheek.

Don't,
Think,
I,
Don't know.

I've,
Been,
Watching,
From a far.

Whispering,
In her,
Ear,
Like you once did to me.

You,
Cheated,
You,
Lied.

Now you,
Got to,
Pay,
The price.

It's,
Over,
For,
You and me.

Thats it,
No,
More,
Of our history.

You,
Broke my,
Heart,
Into two.

Now,
I have,
To,
Leave you.

Goodbye,
Forever,
I guess,
We weren't,
Ment together.

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Steven Mcmorrow February 28, 2009 at 4:51 PM I know what you are going through. Good poem, releasing your anger and pain in your writings. keep up the good work. Steven

John Loving Iii September 4, 2008 at 10:41 AM it's the bravest of us that can realy go through with it. did you or are these just words? jhl

Steven Mcmorrow September 3, 2008 at 11:45 AM I totally know what you are/were feeling. I've felt that pain before and it is awful. but your poem was awesome. Steven

Deneen White September 1, 2008 at 12:42 PM hi Becky, I don't know if this is inspired of recent events or not, but I am sorry for what you are going through, in this write I can feel the raw sense of pain and passion, great write, take care D-nyce