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It's Our Wedding Day

I look at you; Oh, what a lovely smile I get dumbfounded for a while. You fit that gown so perfectly; And how's my get up for today? A daddy's darling, you're his pride and joy; And I am just a (lowly/naughty) boy. But mom is proud of me as well; She knows my love for you is real. We have our hope of the life ahead; Our dream to follow to where it leads. A happy ending is just nonsense Because when love is true it never ends. We cherish moments of then and now But the time has come for our solemn vows Bouquets are lined for you and me Let's walk the aisle, it's our wedding day. Author: Jecon B. Nadela Date & Time of writing: Sept. 23, 2013 ; 2:03 pm - 2:35 pm I purposely wrote the above poem as lyric of a wedding ballad for the forth-coming wedding of my niece Leslie Ann Nadela and Morris Reyes Tabada in December 2013. I came up with a melody for this song but I shall gladly appreciate a musician who may happen to come across this poem and put in his version of melody that would suite to my taste (which I prefer traditional and acoustic or un-synthesized accompaniment type) of song. Pls. send feedback if you'd like to send me your demo and have this piece of literature our collaborative piece. Thanks...

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Date: 5/22/2014 8:35:00 AM
ok, thank you for the comment on my comment
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Date: 5/21/2014 1:39:00 PM
Jecon, this is wonderful.... I will think on the request...Linda
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Jecon B. Nadela
Date: 5/22/2014 6:17:00 AM
Hi, it's been a heart-warming reply... thank you very much.
Date: 5/21/2014 11:06:00 AM
great write hope after you find someone to put music to this you post it somewhere
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Jecon B. Nadela
Date: 5/22/2014 6:18:00 AM
thank you very much for taking time to read my work and the appreciation.

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