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It's One of Those Fabulous Poems

IT’S ONE OF THOSE FABULOUS POEMS								 

It’s one of those poems
full of whimsical stuff
when you’ve read a few lines
you’ve had more than enough. 
it triggers a smile 
and it throws you off-track
you don’t want to read it
but keep coming back
it has no direction 
no themes or no plots
but it grabs your attention
seizes your thoughts.
it’s one of those poems
you just can’t explain
why you read it
again and again.

It’s one of those poems
that just doesn't make sense
it has not a present
or even past tense
with the subject   confusing
it doesn’t seem fair
it sucks you right in 
then leaves you hanging there
it may give you a headache
it may make you groan
but somehow you just 
can’t leave it alone.
it’s one of those poems
you’d like to hide on a shelf
but you wish you had
written your self.

It’s one of those poems
where the style is wrong
too long for a lyric
too short for a song
It’s one of those poems
difficult to review
the meter is off
the formats askew
it’s one of those poems
you never thought you would keep
but  it plays in your mind
as you’re trying to sleep
though  it's not your genre
somehow it hooks you
you can’t wait till
your friends read it too.

IT'S ONE OF THOSE FABULOUS POEMS!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/14/2016 2:02:00 PM
Hi Liz, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.
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Date: 3/13/2016 10:38:00 AM
Liz, Congratulations on your win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "Names on Poetry Soup" if you like. It would be nice to hear from you and all those who I honored with a placement. XOX ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/6/2015 2:25:00 PM
Great whimsy of how something can get its hooks in U.S...fun! Word play was just as fun as the message here. Delighted you did it as a rhyme, fun mini plots!
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Date: 11/6/2015 1:36:00 PM
Cute and quirky! Smooth rhymes and flow. Love, Kim
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Date: 11/6/2015 11:13:00 AM
So right, we've all read one of those. Love this poem it's chirpy, fun and flows wonderfully.
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Liz Labadie-Reilly
Date: 11/6/2015 12:24:00 PM
Thank you for your wonderful feedback.

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