It's Not Me, It's You

It's true that I could be more lovin'
as I shove you head first in the oven,

but I can't help but feel so elated
that with you your breath is cremated.

7/16/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 11:33 AM
Man, this is so cool cruel, Dale. Ha, ha ... ha. It made the little Grinch in me smile. This is my poem of the day today. Love and joy always.
Cozart Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 11:38 AM
Thanks so much for reading, Freddie. Good to hear from you.
Horsman Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 3:19 PM
Wow, Deep one Dale, and clever. love this. Harry
Cozart Avatar
July 18, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Thank you, Harry.
Allison Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 4:04 PM
oh so clever Dale:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 4:15 PM
Thanks, Jan!
Kiser Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 2:40 PM
Well, now I have to go pee. Love it!
Cozart Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 2:55 PM
Thanks, ML!
Gauthier Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 8:39 PM
Love this epigram. The love exudes.
Cozart Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 8:04 AM
Thanks, Line.
Smith Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 7:27 PM
It's definitely you lol... awesome Dale
Cozart Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 7:38 PM
Thanks, Tim. Glad you liked it.
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