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It's Not Fair

it's not fair a child out here alone it's not fair wondering alone in the dark everyone else tucked safely in bed it's not fair the sun rises again and all is the same it's not fair no one seeing me out here so small and alone it's not fair

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/4/2010 5:09:00 PM
Congratulations, Sheila! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/4/2010 11:36:00 AM
Congrats Sheila on your winning poem in Gareth's Leave me hanging contest with this fabulous write.. enjoy your special win..with luv..
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Date: 8/4/2010 10:38:00 AM
Congratulations Sheila on your win in Gareth James's contest "Leave Me Hanging". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/28/2010 6:03:00 PM
I have said for many years that the homeless problem in america is one that needs to be addressed. We seem to turn our heads and focus on other things when we could help those less fortunate than us. Excellent poem.
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Date: 4/19/2010 3:33:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sheila. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/18/2010 2:03:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... enjoyed reading your creative write..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/18/2010 12:16:00 PM
SAD, BUT, Nice one,P.D.
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