It"s Not a Party Without Me

Hey it"s been awhile how ya doin like I care.
Writting little bits of misery isnt my style.
Drinking till dawn writting low brow poems is something 
I do with such great flare.


John Patrick  you know the rest.
Never got a degree but i got something else.
more than a few times incase you havent guessed.

Turn off the lights i'll just use my hands to see.
Yes im way worse in person.
But ya know it just aint a party without me.

Were theres gasoline so should  there be fire.
Far from a saint.
But I have dated a couple girls who once sang in the choir.

You may won the contest but I really didnt lose.
cause you gotta ribbon and me  I gotta bottle of booze.

Guess who never paid attention in class?
I was to busy staring at the teachers.
Uhh miss hotness could i please have the hall pass.

Wonder what slowed us down  uhh probaly
when we hit that tree.
You know my friends it just isnt a party without me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/1/2010 11:26:00 PM
Enjoyed this write, John--you sure say it like it is and it sure seems to be a fun party ;) thanks again so much for all your wonderful comments, it has also led me to read your Julie's moving poems, thank you for that--you 2 are very lucky indeed to have each other ^_^ smiles to both of you :)
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:52:00 PM
What caught my eye about partying was the girls that sang in the choir. I always heard...Oh well I better not tell that here. Don't want not trouble...LOL Enjoyed....Marty
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Date: 2/1/2010 8:20:00 AM
Just luv the title to this poem being up for a good party myself.. luv your flowing story John... I am sure u ARE the life of any party .. if u are as great as your poetry... thankxxx for your terrific comments on my poetry.. lets read more of each other OK? luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/25/2010 11:30:00 AM
Great write baby. But the only person your going to use those hands on in the dark are me. :) love you
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