Its Nice

I guess everything I did or do is not good enough for you,
This Mr Nice guy is not working out to your standards isn't it true.
What are you asking for from me, would you like the beast unleashed,
like it was before I turned into an angel that was kissed? 

You have been asking for it, for a long time now,
the beast wants to tear out of my skin and make you drown. 
Kill you and devour you piece by piece,
than spit you out into hell where you'll burn like the trees. 

What haven't I given you that you have treated me this way,
I show you live and care but you burned my heart like a pile of hay. 
So for my final words, be cautious of the daemon YOU have unleashed,
Cause one wrong move and your body will be incomplete.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 14, 2013 at 9:08 PM
Roman , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .
Cooper Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 10:11 PM
wow what a powerful piece
Chebukin Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 3:48 AM
Thank you dear. :)
Palmer Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 10:08 PM
dont let the bad side of life draw you out,be strong,well written
Chebukin Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 3:47 AM
Thanx bro. Will keep that in mind.
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