Get Your Premium Membership

It's Nature's Way

Flitting ‘mid the subtle hint of fall lost amid the maple’s camouflage she floats on iridescent wings attended by leaves mimic entourage. Rises o’er the heights of tartan trees savors the beauty, courts the breeze last dance to celebrate the day curtain call, applause, it’s nature’s play. . ©10/2/2019 Writing Challenge, October – Butterfly Sponsor, Dear Heart – Wiishkobi Ode .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/8/2019 7:40:00 PM
John congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem!
Login to Reply
Date: 10/6/2019 7:24:00 PM
G'day John … enjoyed your poem John. Not too many humans realize that nature is the most powerful force on our planet - thanks John - Lindsay
Login to Reply
Lawless Avatar
John Lawless
Date: 10/7/2019 7:02:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by Lindsay.....mostly humans don't realize a whole lot of stuff.....about a whole lot of stuff....
Date: 10/6/2019 11:52:00 AM
- Lovely described ... congratulations on a great win in the contest, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Lawless Avatar
John Lawless
Date: 10/7/2019 7:00:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise
Date: 10/2/2019 8:08:00 AM
This is so beautiful. I'm amazed at your creativity in so few words. Blessings
Login to Reply
Lawless Avatar
John Lawless
Date: 10/2/2019 2:40:00 PM
Thanks Regina your input is always appreciated.
Date: 10/2/2019 8:08:00 AM
Your tartan trees bring me to my poetic knees ;), This is wonderful! xomo
Login to Reply
Lawless Avatar
John Lawless
Date: 10/2/2019 2:39:00 PM
...yeah, a bunch of long legged scotsmen with boney knees.
Date: 10/2/2019 8:07:00 AM
Beautifully done. Such a soft and inviting poem. Best wishes in the contest
Login to Reply
Lawless Avatar
John Lawless
Date: 10/2/2019 2:38:00 PM
i was attempting to write a poem about butterflies without mentioning......you guessed it.....butterflies. thanks for stopping by
Date: 10/2/2019 8:03:00 AM
This is beautifully written. Well done John :)
Login to Reply
Lawless Avatar
John Lawless
Date: 10/2/2019 2:37:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, appreciate you stopping by to read and comment

Book: Shattered Sighs