It's Nature's Way

Flitting ‘mid the subtle hint of fall
lost amid the maple’s camouflage 
she floats on iridescent wings
attended by leaves mimic entourage.

Rises o’er the heights of tartan trees
savors the beauty, courts the breeze
last dance to celebrate the day
curtain call, applause, it’s nature’s play.
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©10/2/2019

Writing Challenge, October – Butterfly

Sponsor, Dear Heart – Wiishkobi Ode

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La France Avatar
October 8, 2019 at 7:40 PM
John congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem!
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October 6, 2019 at 7:24 PM
G'day John … enjoyed your poem John. Not too many humans realize that nature is the most powerful force on our planet - thanks John - Lindsay
Lawless Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 7:02 AM
Thanks for stopping by Lindsay.....mostly humans don't realize a whole lot of stuff.....about a whole lot of stuff....
Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 11:52 AM
- Lovely described ... congratulations on a great win in the contest, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lawless Avatar
October 7, 2019 at 7:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise
Mcintosh Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 8:08 AM
This is so beautiful. I'm amazed at your creativity in so few words. Blessings
Lawless Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 2:40 PM
Thanks Regina your input is always appreciated.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 8:08 AM
Your tartan trees bring me to my poetic knees ;), This is wonderful! xomo
Lawless Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 2:39 PM
...yeah, a bunch of long legged scotsmen with boney knees.
Green Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 8:07 AM
Beautifully done. Such a soft and inviting poem. Best wishes in the contest
Lawless Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 2:38 PM
i was attempting to write a poem about butterflies without mentioning......you guessed it.....butterflies. thanks for stopping by
Sands Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 8:03 AM
This is beautifully written. Well done John :)
Lawless Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 2:37 PM
Thanks Heidi, appreciate you stopping by to read and comment
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