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Its Monsoon??

Dusty air I breath Its been so long A drop of water!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/8/2009 10:40:00 AM
Great Haiku Sangam, well written>James
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Date: 3/22/2009 6:46:00 AM
Namaste Sangam. Welcome to the 'Soup'. A short piece, though it creates a vaste picture. Best to you and yours....Mikki
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Date: 3/21/2009 5:04:00 AM
This is a great haiku. excellent, in fact. well done. love, Kristin
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Date: 3/20/2009 6:18:00 PM
Interesting contast of the poem with the title. Much said in just three lines. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 3/20/2009 8:22:00 AM
Sangam, this can be read on more than one level. I see both the thirst for water and the thirst for love. Compelling work! Love, Carolyn
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