Its Monsoon??

Dusty air I breath
Its been so long
A drop of water!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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June 8, 2009 at 10:40 AM
Great Haiku Sangam, well written>James
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March 22, 2009 at 6:46 AM
Namaste Sangam. Welcome to the 'Soup'. A short piece, though it creates a vaste picture. Best to you and yours....Mikki
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March 21, 2009 at 5:04 AM
This is a great haiku. excellent, in fact. well done. love, Kristin
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March 20, 2009 at 6:18 PM
Interesting contast of the poem with the title. Much said in just three lines. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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March 20, 2009 at 8:22 AM
Sangam, this can be read on more than one level. I see both the thirst for water and the thirst for love. Compelling work! Love, Carolyn
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