Edward Ebbs Poet Haiku

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It's January

I rise from my sleep
looking outside my window
a tree stands leafless 

Holding tight to life
each day's breath is heavier
each has a season

Edward J Ebbs - 05/13/14



Written for a Contest, Two Haiku (Month of January)

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Pandita Sietesantos July 9, 2014 at 4:26 PM Hi Edward, this is an excellent write. Congratulations on a great win!

Saba Khan June 8, 2014 at 11:48 PM Congratulations :)

Poet Destroyer A June 8, 2014 at 5:43 PM Congratulations, Linda

Paul Callus June 8, 2014 at 2:19 PM Love both haiku, but the second might tilt the scales! Congrats on a fine win. // paul

Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2014 at 10:40 AM wow, that second one is profound! Congrats on your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta June 8, 2014 at 9:43 AM Congrats on the win in the haiku contest on January, Ed

Skat A June 8, 2014 at 8:36 AM ED, :) Congratulations, thank you for the support....... SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen May 14, 2014 at 4:01 AM - Very nice January haiku, Ed ! - Luck in contest. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)