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It's Intangible

So what single thing makes our writes so charming If I knew, I'd be driving a Ferrari instead of this jalopy I'm parking It's intangible they say Choosing words to convey Every day a new journey through life we're embarking

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/12/2016 9:56:00 PM

Love the wisdom of this one! Words aren't really a science and thus can be difficult to explain why some move us and others don't. But I think honesty, integrity and especially in your case, an outrageous optimism and sense of humor, go a long a way in making us click Jack Ellison's Poetry List. Simply put ... you're poetry makes me smile :)

Jack Ellison
Date: 2/13/2016 7:40:00 AM

Great having you back, my friend!!! "outrageous optimism" LOL Have an amazing day Mr. Timothy!!!

Tim Smith

Date: 2/12/2016 2:18:00 PM

I'm also driving that same old jalopy....the words that I choose are sometimes so sloppy...the meaning of this...a hit or a miss...what you writing next, mind if I copy

Jack Ellison
Date: 2/13/2016 7:53:00 AM

Feel free, my loyal friend! Cheers!

Carol Eastman

Date: 2/12/2016 1:28:00 PM

Ahhhh... Imagination makes our writes... Something that can take others to such heights... They can raise us up to the Northern Lights... Or to great theaterical high lights... And they can tuck us in with wonderful dreams at night...

Jack Ellison
Date: 2/13/2016 7:59:00 AM

Wonderful lim my dear Carol!!!! YEE HAW! xxx