It's In Our Jeans

In beautiful and well stretched blue jeans, we walked
Accompanied by perfectly charming shirts
Smiles infect as our fingers locked and sway
Through the pavement to the dance hall
Where glimmering colorfully fragmented lights
Acknowledged our presence
And ordered the best beat of the year
As we bend to answer the call of melody
Wonderfully carved waist freezed all sights
As it gradually moves, all eyes move
I held her close and whispered
Your dress is the best
She replied "Yours is amazing"


Author: Joseph Osita
For Nette's contest:” It’s in the jeans"
13/06/2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Onclaud Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 5:12 AM
hi joesph.. been a while!..could i ask a favor?.. kindly comment on my latest poem called " chapter seven.".. i'm getting sytem errors for hours and would just want to know if there is a server problem here.. thanks loads!.. i can't reply to others as well:) huggs, nette
Kendrick Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 5:42 PM
Congrats on your win with this creative work..Sara
Dufresne Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 6:01 PM
congratulations Joseph
Phookan Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 1:46 PM
Congrats Joseph on your win in nette's contest with this very sweet write..gautami
Brown Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 10:29 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Jeans" contest Joseph. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 10:15 AM
Very nice, Joseph. Like the sensual nature of your poem very much. Really sets a romantic mood. Congratulations on your win in Nette's contest! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 6:46 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Joseph
Poet Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 12:37 AM
Lovely poem Joseph...Congrats on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 9:56 PM
Two in love and wearing blue jeans. Sounds wonderful, Joseph! Congrats on the winners' list!
Sweetheart Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 8:45 PM
Congrats Joseph on your super win in the jeans contest with this perfect entry luv..
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