It's Good To Be On Top!!!!!!!!!

When god is favoring
Our luck is favoring
We are capable
With qualities so able,
We when come on top
The feeling is speechless
Confidence, our work area,
Our personality, our talents,
All are given new ray
All together gives perfect way
We are the star,
We are so famous,
Living in this era, the era of the king
It's good to give happiness to our creators
Credit goes to parents, teachers,
But ultimately to us.
This feeling if everlasting can react adversely
But this happiness is at the pinnacle.

                                          by:-
                                          Vrushani Thaker
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
September 26, 2010 at 5:47 PM
Yes, being on top is a great feeling and many are to thank for it as well! good message, Virushani!!
Mehta Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 3:43 AM
Yes , I agree it is good to be on top by the blessings of parents, teachers but the most crucial is you, yourself, Nice write Vrushani
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