Its End Is Nigh

In sorrowful drift Its moment in time ceases To our earth it falls

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James Peranteau

Date: 4/24/2010 6:48:00 AM

I love this cycle of life you've painted here Mr. Fraser ! I pray my fall is as soft as an autums leaf ! Great write ! james Oh and by the way Sir...thank you for your uplifting thoughts in regards God's gift to me....poetry ! You are truly a kind sort ! james

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/23/2010 11:04:00 AM

Great write that is thought provoking.. Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/23/2010 9:05:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your Haiku today James. Have a wonderful weekend and keep the ink flowing. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/22/2010 11:48:00 PM

A nice haiku. I enjoyed it

John Loving Iii

Date: 4/22/2010 3:29:00 PM

if people would notice! john

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/22/2010 3:24:00 PM

That sorrowful drift..I can feel it in all senses..Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2010 3:09:00 PM

The leaf certainly does appear to be "in sorrowful drift," James. Great entry! And you know I'm always cheering for your success. Love to the Highlander, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/22/2010 3:00:00 PM

Deep one, enjoyed..p.d.