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It's Elemental

Earth is our home 
                created with love.
                Honor it.

                 Air is our freedom
                 to think and create.
                 Breathe deeply.

                 Fire is the love
                 that burns within us.
                 Live with passion.

                 Water is life
                 to all creatures big and small.
                 Drink it up.


                 By:  Carole O'Terry Duet
                 Copyright:  11-17-17
                 "All Rights Reserved"

creationearthfirefreedomlifefree verse

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Ricky Muse

Date: 12/31/2017 2:32:00 PM

A poem with a spine. A thread that binds it. A very passionate write.

Carole Duet
Date: 12/31/2017 3:36:00 PM

Thank you, Richard, for your visit and delightful comment on this poem. :D Carole Duet

CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/12/2017 12:34:00 AM

Hey, Carole - I've been gone, but now I've come along cause I've missed your cute face and your writing. Andrea's comments go for me, as well, in fact, she and I often discuss astrology, plus. But while Andrea is filling home with creative love, I am air free flying creativity! Very clever. I enjoyed it for being unique in such a clever way. Hope you are golden ... CayCay

Carole Duet
Date: 12/31/2017 3:34:00 PM

Hi CayCay! Glad your are back and thank you so much for your lovely comment on this poem. :D Carole Duet

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2017 7:56:00 PM

I love how you showcased all four elements. I really like this because I am big time into astrology as well.

Carole Duet
Date: 12/3/2017 10:56:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. I'm into Astrology too. :D Carole

John Gondolf

Date: 11/30/2017 10:56:00 AM

Carole, I agree with your sentiments, nature is a gift of God and it's our duty to preserve it. Nicely penned! John

Carole Duet
Date: 12/3/2017 10:55:00 AM

Thank you, John. Yes, you might like my poem, "Mother Nature", too. Thanks for your nice comment. Carole Duet

Kristina Whitmore

Date: 11/28/2017 1:44:00 PM

The four elements that create and shape the circle of life. I love this poem and the energy. Very inspired by this one. Thanks! XO

Carole Duet
Date: 11/29/2017 9:48:00 PM

Hello Kristina! Thank you so much and I'm so glad it inspired you. :D Carole Duet

Winged Warrior

Date: 11/27/2017 4:43:00 AM

Beautifully said my friend...you've been gone for a while Carole...hope everything is OK...god bless...^WW^

Carole Duet
Date: 11/29/2017 9:50:00 PM

Hi WW! Yes, my computer crashed and so I was "temporarily out of order". lol Anyway, thanks for the comment and for dropping by. :D Carole Duet

Pashang Salehi

Date: 11/21/2017 6:55:00 PM

Beautiful words...

Carole Duet
Date: 11/23/2017 2:36:00 AM

Thank you, Pashang.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/21/2017 7:58:00 AM

Simple and beautiful with all the truth in it, Carole:)

Carole Duet
Date: 11/23/2017 2:37:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jo. Carole Duet

Edward Mccall

Date: 11/19/2017 5:01:00 PM

So beautifully said Carole You bring to light the need to preserve this planet our beautiful blue marble in space. well said Carole well said.

Carole Duet
Date: 11/20/2017 7:32:00 AM

Thank you so much, Edward for your very kind comment and thanks for dropping by. :D. Carole Duet

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/17/2017 3:59:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Carole. I love the element component weaved into the spiritual cloth. Such creative genius this poem be. Solar bright write. A gem of a poem w/sparkling wisdom. An instant fave for sure. Love and joy always.

Carole Duet
Date: 11/17/2017 8:13:00 PM

Thank you so much, Freddie. I sp appreciate your very kind comment. Caeole Duet

Maria Williams

Date: 11/17/2017 1:34:00 AM

I think that people are fighting very hard to save this wonderful planet that we live in. We must all do our part and heed this inspirational poem of yours Carole. Wise words....Maria xxx

Carole Duet
Date: 11/17/2017 8:19:00 PM

Yes, I know SOME people are doing their part to save our beautiful earth but then there are those careless ones who we must seek to convert to becoming Protectors. Maybe more poetry is needed. Thank you for your inspiring comment, Maria.