Carole Duet Poet Free verse

It's Elemental

Earth is our home 
                created with love.
                Honor it.

                 Air is our freedom
                 to think and create.
                 Breathe deeply.

                 Fire is the love
                 that burns within us.
                 Live with passion.

                 Water is life
                 to all creatures big and small.
                 Drink it up.


                 By:  Carole O'Terry Duet
                 Copyright:  11-17-17
                 "All Rights Reserved"

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Richard Evans December 31, 2017 at 2:32 PM A poem with a spine. A thread that binds it. A very passionate write. Carole Duet December 31, 2017 at 3:36 PM Thank you, Richard, for your visit and delightful comment on this poem. :D Carole Duet

CayCay Godwin December 12, 2017 at 12:34 AM Hey, Carole - I've been gone, but now I've come along cause I've missed your cute face and your writing. Andrea's comments go for me, as well, in fact, she and I often discuss astrology, plus. But while Andrea is filling home with creative love, I am air free flying creativity! Very clever. I enjoyed it for being unique in such a clever way. Hope you are golden ... CayCay Carole Duet December 31, 2017 at 3:34 PM Hi CayCay! Glad your are back and thank you so much for your lovely comment on this poem. :D Carole Duet

Andrea Dietrich December 2, 2017 at 7:56 PM I love how you showcased all four elements. I really like this because I am big time into astrology as well. Carole Duet December 3, 2017 at 10:56 AM Thanks, Andrea. I'm into Astrology too. :D Carole

John Gondolf November 30, 2017 at 10:56 AM Carole, I agree with your sentiments, nature is a gift of God and it's our duty to preserve it. Nicely penned! John Carole Duet December 3, 2017 at 10:55 AM Thank you, John. Yes, you might like my poem, "Mother Nature", too. Thanks for your nice comment. Carole Duet

Kristina Whitmore November 28, 2017 at 1:44 PM The four elements that create and shape the circle of life. I love this poem and the energy. Very inspired by this one. Thanks! XO Carole Duet November 29, 2017 at 9:48 PM Hello Kristina! Thank you so much and I'm so glad it inspired you. :D Carole Duet

Winged Warrior November 27, 2017 at 4:43 AM Beautifully said my friend...you've been gone for a while Carole...hope everything is OK...god bless...^WW^ Carole Duet November 29, 2017 at 9:50 PM Hi WW! Yes, my computer crashed and so I was "temporarily out of order". lol Anyway, thanks for the comment and for dropping by. :D Carole Duet

Pashang Salehi November 21, 2017 at 6:55 PM Beautiful words... Carole Duet November 23, 2017 at 2:36 AM Thank you, Pashang.

Joanna Daniel November 21, 2017 at 7:58 AM Simple and beautiful with all the truth in it, Carole:) Carole Duet November 23, 2017 at 2:37 AM Thank you so much, Jo. Carole Duet

Edward Mccall November 19, 2017 at 5:01 PM So beautifully said Carole You bring to light the need to preserve this planet our beautiful blue marble in space. well said Carole well said. Carole Duet November 20, 2017 at 7:32 AM Thank you so much, Edward for your very kind comment and thanks for dropping by. :D. Carole Duet

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 17, 2017 at 3:59 PM Beautiful poem, Carole. I love the element component weaved into the spiritual cloth. Such creative genius this poem be. Solar bright write. A gem of a poem w/sparkling wisdom. An instant fave for sure. Love and joy always. Carole Duet November 17, 2017 at 8:13 PM Thank you so much, Freddie. I sp appreciate your very kind comment. Caeole Duet

Maria Williams November 17, 2017 at 1:34 AM I think that people are fighting very hard to save this wonderful planet that we live in. We must all do our part and heed this inspirational poem of yours Carole. Wise words....Maria xxx Carole Duet November 17, 2017 at 8:19 PM Yes, I know SOME people are doing their part to save our beautiful earth but then there are those careless ones who we must seek to convert to becoming Protectors. Maybe more poetry is needed. Thank you for your inspiring comment, Maria.

Silent One November 14, 2017 at 9:44 AM You are right, sadly so many abuse the Earth and take it for advantage.. You can see the signs that it is deteriorating... Well written Carole.. Carole Duet November 14, 2017 at 10:24 AM I know, Z. It's saveable tho I believe. Fight for the Earth!! Tks for your comment. :D. Carole

Arthur Vaso November 13, 2017 at 9:55 PM Very well said, great write! Carole Duet November 14, 2017 at 10:20 AM Thanks, Arthur. Glad you liked it. Carole:D