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ITs AN OLD FASHIONED

It’s an old-fashioned Bell - a silver-tingling, it’s a-ringing The choir’s singing Their wrists a-swinging, up and down It’s an old-fashioned Carriage ride, abiding on the crunchy snow Fresh and new Flakes still falling, silently blowing It’s an old-fashioned Popcorn string, winding ‘round the pine Some popped Into cherub mouths, those kids grinning It’s an old-fashioned Reading of the ghosts of past, present, future Chills from the draft As the smoke pours into the hereafter It’s an old-fashioned Christmas Eve - carolling comes calling To each decked out door Gifts scattered under tree at midnight It’s an old-fashioned Church service - all eyes on Jesus The babe’s in the manger Kids - Bethlehem clothed Bell - a silver-tingling, it’s a-ringing Carriage ride, abiding on the crunchy snow Popcorn string, winding ‘round the pine Reading of the ghosts of past, present, future Christmas Eve - carolling comes calling Church service - all eyes on Jesus Bring back the old-fashioned joy

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Date: 12/19/2023 7:04:00 PM
Those were the days, my friend, we thought they'd never end. Surprise! They did. It okay, everything that is really important is still the same inside of me. :-) Fun read, my friend. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Kim. Hugs, Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/19/2023 8:43:00 PM
Thank you, Bill! Merry Christmas!
Date: 12/19/2023 6:14:00 AM
A most delightful read for me Kim with wonderful imagery! Smiles, Anne :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/19/2023 7:14:00 AM
Thank you, Anne!
Date: 12/19/2023 5:48:00 AM
Beautiful sights and sounds of the festive season, Kim. Much joy exudes from your poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/19/2023 7:14:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 12/19/2023 12:27:00 AM
Would love to see those old fashioned Christmases return, sadly it has become very commercialised now. Happy memories Kim. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/19/2023 5:33:00 AM
Merry Christmas, Tom! Thank you!
Date: 12/18/2023 5:52:00 PM
The joys of an old-fashioned Christmas. Thanks for the memories, my friend. I hope you have an enjoyable Christmas.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2023 7:07:00 PM
Merry Christmas, Jerry!
Date: 12/18/2023 4:57:00 PM
Oh I love this and it will be a Fave. I like the second stanza a lot. I have always loved the carriage ride in snow . Thanks for sharing. Nice to read tonight :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2023 5:01:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi! :)

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