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For the Still Holding My Own Poetry Contest of Margarita Lillico

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It's Almost Criminal

I’m a broken down ugly old sink,
but I’ll still give you water to drink,
yet I leak all the time,
and it should be a crime.
I’m so loud that you won’t sleep a wink.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


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Date: 12/11/2024 11:37:00 AM
ahh, sweet ~ what a considerate and charming sink
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Date: 12/2/2024 6:36:00 AM
Good one, congratulations
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Date: 11/28/2024 7:49:00 PM
I've had this kind of sink before. Maybe it got smashed up because it was so loud?
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Date: 11/28/2024 1:32:00 PM
Congratulations! Death by a thousand drips!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/28/2024 4:44:00 PM
thanks, Margarita. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/8/2024 5:36:00 PM
LOL !!
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Date: 11/7/2024 10:22:00 AM
Hood one Anfrea, and clevet! Hugs, Pangid Hope ais well with you and yours?
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Date: 11/7/2024 10:16:00 AM
Hi Andrea your limerick left me with a Sink ing feeling. Good luck in the contest. Xx
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Date: 11/6/2024 11:37:00 AM
Plink plink.))) Just my attempt at resonance Andrea.' As long as you appreciate my attempt I don't want you giving me ( that sinking feeling?) lol)))
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Joe Maverick
Date: 11/6/2024 2:53:00 PM
You pre plaugerist..!! Lol)))) Love ya.'
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/6/2024 11:51:00 AM
that word also occurred to me for use!
Date: 11/6/2024 3:36:00 AM
Brilliant, Andrea.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/6/2024 11:51:00 AM
thanks, Victor
Date: 11/6/2024 12:58:00 AM
This is so cute, creative and poignant!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/6/2024 11:51:00 AM
thanks
Date: 11/5/2024 9:45:00 PM
Oh, love it. Awesome writing. God bless you sweet friend. love, Gina
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/6/2024 11:51:00 AM
thanks, and God bless you too.
Date: 11/5/2024 9:29:00 PM
Oh gosh, this is so fitting for that picture prompt, iv got to admit i had a difficult time looking at that picture however youv somehow interpreted it so well hah! You are just beyond clever! Best wishes for the contest; so happy to see you posting! Sending you light always~
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/6/2024 11:52:00 AM
thanks, Just hope the sponsor likes my interpretation
Date: 11/5/2024 9:07:00 PM
I'm the sink I've had enough, Reach down and turn the Shutoff. Enjoyed this one Andrea. Thanks for posting.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 11/6/2024 11:52:00 AM
you are welcome
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