Gary Smith Poet Rhyme

It's All Right For Them

When it's my turn
To be put in the ground,
I'd love to be there
To see who's around.

Who's shedding tears
And actually grieving,
Is anyone smirking
Glad at my leaving.

I hope it pours down
As they lower me in,
I'd watch them squirming
Getting soaked to the skin.

I'm not really bitter
But it's all right for them
For I'll not see sunshine,
Ever again.

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P.S. Awtry December 31, 2018 at 6:11 PM i really like this! it's dark and real and clever! Gary Smith January 1, 2019 at 7:34 AM Thank you P.S. :)

Charlie Smith December 31, 2018 at 3:28 PM Don't think you'll need crowd control, good one Gary, Happy New Year... Gary Smith December 31, 2018 at 3:35 PM Thank you Charlie, happy Happy New Year to you. :)

Jan Allison December 31, 2018 at 2:02 PM My friend says the very same thing Gary and also happy that someone else will be footing the bill lol:-) Happy New Year!!!:-) hugs Jan xx Gary Smith December 31, 2018 at 2:03 PM Thank you Jan, and a Happy New Year to you. :)

Ed Morris December 31, 2018 at 1:58 PM Ha ha! Love it. :-) Gary Smith December 31, 2018 at 1:58 PM Thank you Ed. :)