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It's All Relative's' In Heaven

Lately I’ve been thinking about heaven And the renowned paradise up there Plus getting to see my brethren And memories that we’ll get to share But a thought came into my noodle An idea I’ve never thought before That my kin, of which there must be oodles Of maybe ten thousand or more Coz I expect most my past relations Have made the trip above the clouds And if they’re all there since creation Then they must have formed a large crowd So that not only grandparents I’ll see Yes sure enough, dead cousins too Plus there’ll be grand’s to the tenth degree In a couple of miles-long queue Yes, they’ll most likely all know my name And introduce me while giving their own But after hugging great, great, great aunt Mame All the other names will remain unknown Yet, in heaven we’ll all be happy And enjoy each day of the week That is until great to the 8th grand pappy Loses his teeth and refuses to speak David Fisher 1/17/2015

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Date: 12/2/2015 11:58:00 PM
david, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
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Date: 12/2/2015 11:14:00 PM
Wonderful write David n so is the win!Big congrats !
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Date: 12/2/2015 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations David.
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Date: 12/2/2015 10:46:00 AM
Congrats on your win and for being a part of my contest!-lu *smiles*
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Date: 2/1/2015 2:49:00 PM
DAVID, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
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Date: 1/29/2015 3:44:00 PM
a 7
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Date: 1/29/2015 3:43:00 PM
so very funny Dave congrats on win hugs
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Date: 1/29/2015 1:45:00 PM
this made me chuckle David many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/29/2015 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your funny poem win, David. a 7 Eve
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Date: 1/28/2015 11:21:00 PM
Congrats on win in "Humor Contest" David God bless. Love
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Date: 1/27/2015 12:49:00 AM
G'day David... Enjoyed your light hearted poem, but one question... how many rellies would you meet if you went to the other place? Just for a visit of course. Regards - Lindsay
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Date: 1/20/2015 12:35:00 PM
That was cute one. A great write and read.
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Date: 1/19/2015 7:29:00 PM
This is indeed humorous! I enjoyed this tale.
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Date: 1/18/2015 4:53:00 PM
we are supposedly perfected in heaven, so grand pappy won't be losing his teeth any more. This was really cute, my friend. makes you really think about our connections. we all go back somewhere in time to be related to each other!! All of heaven will be our family!
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Date: 1/17/2015 2:15:00 PM
Lol the humour here:-) Hugs Jan xx. good luck in the contest:-)
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