It's All Relative's' In Heaven

Lately I’ve been thinking about heaven
And the renowned paradise up there
Plus getting to see my brethren
And memories that we’ll get to share

But a thought came into my noodle
An idea I’ve never thought before
That my kin, of which there must be oodles
Of maybe ten thousand or more

Coz I expect most my past relations
Have made the trip above the clouds
And if they’re all there since creation
Then they must have formed a large crowd

So that not only grandparents I’ll see
Yes sure enough, dead cousins too
Plus there’ll be grand’s to the tenth degree
In a couple of miles-long queue

Yes, they’ll most likely all know my name
And introduce me while giving their own
But after hugging great, great, great aunt Mame
All the other names will remain unknown

Yet, in heaven we’ll all be happy
And enjoy each day of the week
That is until great to the 8th grand pappy
Loses his teeth and refuses to speak


David Fisher  1/17/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A  Avatar
December 2, 2015 at 11:58 PM
david, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
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December 2, 2015 at 11:14 PM
Wonderful write David n so is the win!Big congrats !
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December 2, 2015 at 12:47 PM
Congratulations David.
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December 2, 2015 at 10:46 AM
Congrats on your win and for being a part of my contest!-lu *smiles*
A  Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 2:49 PM
DAVID, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
Hamilton Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 3:44 PM
a 7
Hamilton Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 3:43 PM
so very funny Dave congrats on win hugs
Allison Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 1:45 PM
this made me chuckle David many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations on your funny poem win, David. a 7 Eve
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 11:21 PM
Congrats on win in "Humor Contest" David God bless. Love
Laurie Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 12:49 AM
G'day David... Enjoyed your light hearted poem, but one question... how many rellies would you meet if you went to the other place? Just for a visit of course. Regards - Lindsay
Kiser Avatar
January 20, 2015 at 12:35 PM
That was cute one. A great write and read.
Lamoureux Avatar
January 19, 2015 at 7:29 PM
This is indeed humorous! I enjoyed this tale.
Dietrich Avatar
January 18, 2015 at 4:53 PM
we are supposedly perfected in heaven, so grand pappy won't be losing his teeth any more. This was really cute, my friend. makes you really think about our connections. we all go back somewhere in time to be related to each other!! All of heaven will be our family!
Allison Avatar
January 17, 2015 at 2:15 PM
Lol the humour here:-) Hugs Jan xx. good luck in the contest:-)
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