Its All About Us

we just keep commenting,
and always  keep resting.
we keep getting tortured, 
but still taunt others.
we don't have time for ourselves,
but all time concerned about the gossip shelves.

 just one complaint on every lip,
why is india not developed?
well, the answer lies with in ourselves
all it takes is strength to find out,
the time to be the change and believe in yourself with no doubt!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 1:13 PM
Yes, you must believe in yourself....but it always nice to get other`s opinion. - Very well written Simran. - oxox Anne-Lise
Utreja Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 12:53 PM
thnxxxxxx.....:)
Ink-U-Script Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 1:09 PM
Love the message here!! enjoyed Simran!!
Utreja Avatar
June 4, 2012 at 1:09 PM
:P well.... our pm has sum better 1s than mine......:) thnxxx nywaz......;)
Palmer Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 12:06 PM
run for the next election you seem to have all the right ideas,loved it
Utreja Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 12:53 PM
:P well out pm has sum better 1s dan mine ..:) thnxx nywaz
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